Confussing if you're illterate.

Like me. LOL LOL

jus kidding. It was really a beautiful story if you think about it. But you know it kinda sounds familure.

"You are so used to things going wrong, that you think it's right when it's wrong, and when it's right it feels so wrong."

Confussing at times but also understanding.

I enjoyed it.

Breath-taking. You've riddled it with paradoxes and parallelism and skepticism and oh, that was wonderfully written! The images are beautiful, and the story is dark and haunting and quite bitter-sweet.

Another wonderful piece.

-paxbanana

*applauds loudly* another job well done! i luved it like i luv all your work!~Em aka TLitD

So wistful and true. So peaceful and disturbing.

You've written my life.

"And they were scared of nothing except something going right"

Love it.