|Reviews for The Best Man|
| Miss Avund chapter 3 . 9/13/2011
Love your story!
Sirius/Dorcas are really cute, especially your way to describe Dorcas!
| Hyper chapter 4 . 6/30/2006
You made me laugh out loud. I'm not usually a fan of this perspective in writing but it really worked well in this story.
Keep up the good work. And do update...I'm seriously still laughing my head off. Poor Sirius.
| Jennie chapter 4 . 6/18/2006
hey! just really liked this story and was wondering if you were planning on updating it!
| Miska chapter 4 . 9/18/2005
I just found this story and I like it! It's really hard to believe you're only 14, your writing style sounds so much more mature- I read your "The Boy" before I saw your profile and I was totally dumbfounded by how amazingly well you write- when I was fourteen all my writing was *crap*! Anyway keep up the good work; i'll be following this!
| shadowydreamer chapter 4 . 9/13/2005
this story is so sweet! but where's it going to end up?
| AllIWannaDo chapter 4 . 9/8/2005
Hmm...I had no idea this story wasn't as popular as your others. Like I said before, I think it's probably your best! Very entertaining. Lol, so James wears a bra? Who knew? It's always the ones you least expect... O_O
I do like the Dorcas/Sirius pairing. It's extremely cute. I understand her confusion regarding her feelings for Sirius versus her grief over the loss of her mother.
Also, what I enjoyed about this chapter was that for once, Lily was able to laugh about something, where before she was kind of acting like a stick in the mud. Although I can relate to that about her. I'm sorta like that, too. Lol.
Anyway, sorry this was so long. Keep up the good work. Update soon. I feel your pain about school. Ugh. Lots of love!
| Sunny or Sunsun18 chapter 4 . 9/5/2005
Hi! Your faithful reviewer is back! Great story, it is so funny! Keep up the awesomely great work!
| JadeGreen14 chapter 4 . 9/4/2005
very, very, very, very, VERY good chapter. I much liked it. Never had an experience of making out in my underwear, though...not exactly planning on it...GOOD chapter! I like it.
| JupiterLily chapter 4 . 9/4/2005
Lol, oh I love this story so much! Great job!
Me: Why are hot dogs called hot dogs? Why not hot... pigs?
This caused my friends to laugh hysterically. Stil not quite sure why, but it must be funny!
| a-dandy-lion chapter 4 . 9/4/2005
that was brill! i'm loving the sirius and dorcas pairing! its fabulous! your fabulous!
| shadowydreamer chapter 3 . 9/1/2005
lols this story is madd hot yo.
| AllIWannaDo chapter 3 . 8/22/2005
Now THIS I like! I think this may be your best work, although I haven't read your other James/Lily fic yet. The only problem is that now I feel dreadfully sorry for Sirius, losing Lily to James and everything, but..ah, well. At least he has Dorcas! What a sweet relationship! Everyone is very in character, and just the way I always imagined them. Keep it up! Lots of love!
| JadeGreen14 chapter 3 . 7/2/2005
i really liked that chapter a lot. it was really good and had a good ending. I can't wait till Sirius apologizes or whatever happens in the next chapter!
| crazy turtle chapter 3 . 6/21/2005
this was so beautiful-definitely one of my favorite chapters. since it's now summer and i don't have my own computer, i'll be reading only until maybe september or so. any type of beta would be fine, mainly on grammar and just critiquing my story before i post it...how long will this be?
| JupiterLily chapter 3 . 6/20/2005
"Be my valentine, Dorcas, or I will perish from my lovesickness!"
Oh, how corny, lol! This story is beautifully written, great job!
Snake 1: Are we poisonous?
Snake 2: I dunno, why?
Snake 1" 'Cause I just bit my lip!