Reviews for Harry Potter and the Spiritus Crystalus |
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Amamama chapter 16 . 12/19/2021 Ahhh… How nice to read (reread) a bobmin story. I’ve always loved the results your cooperation. Totally not canon, of course, but with some very nice ideas. Like Jack the big hearted soldier, and showing what abuse does to a person. The kids growing up, a competent minister -the list is long. I hope you both are doing well, that the profile not updated with a date of passing means that you’re both enjoying life and each other, and that Bob has received some magical treatment that really works. Many blessings to you and yours, Berte |
libbyxox1 chapter 16 . 11/12/2021 very good story !i had a lot of fun reading it! |
libbyxox1 chapter 6 . 11/11/2021 great story,but why does harry not look at the letter pendant? |
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 16 . 7/6/2021 What an amazing story. Thanks for sharing. |
Bele chapter 16 . 6/14/2021 love. just love. thank you from the bottom of my heart, rest well! |
Nightwing2013 chapter 4 . 6/8/2021 My correction has been adequately, and hilariously rebuffed, so I bow to the experts. Those darn Keebler elves. |
Nightwing2013 chapter 3 . 6/8/2021 I know it’s been over a decade, and the canon series was either incomplete or just recently completed at the time of publish, but I feel like I should attempt to correct the wonderful couple that created this masterpiece. If I remember correctly, there are 2 ‘t’s in Gringotts, and the Director’s name is Ragnok. Still loving it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2021 the second I saw Severus Snape in a pairing as well as RL/NT, I knew this story was going to be absolute dogshit |
potterpalspranks chapter 13 . 4/23/2021 I know it was a scene change header. However, I think "Somewhere in England, Location unknown." is a great response to, "Where would I be without you?" |
potterpalspranks chapter 1 . 4/22/2021 I didn't think about it during the first book but why isn't insensitive Ronald, or any of the Weasley clan, afraid of something from a dead person that thinks for itself after Hatry's second year? If I remember correctly it was Ronald who said in that book that Arthur always told them to never trust something that thinks for itself when you can't see where it keeps it brains. |
Anonymous chapter 5 . 4/6/2021 I think you should have shown what is going on in Harry's mind. |
kcrump88 chapter 16 . 3/18/2021 Very well done! I enjoyed both stories and your writing style immensely. Your disclaimers were particularly entertaining. Kudos to you both and I look forward to reading your future endeavors! |
Shadow315 chapter 9 . 2/14/2021 I think the last chapter is the only part that I can't get behind. Whether Danny was a Death Eater or not, she contaminated Harry's ointment then she used an Unforgivable on a 13yr old girl and took her to be raped - knowingly. Where's the justice for that girl? Because of Dumbledore and his 'second chances' Wan is allowed back into the school where her 13yr victim will be forced to see her. That little girl had an Unforgivable user on her and was sexually assaulted, nearly raped. On top of that is now the knowledge that her Headmaster cared more about giving one of her attackers a second chance, than her. I know, later, Wan gives her life for Serena but that doesn't change anything. And Harry has to save her life and that's good? Knowing it would tye him to her? |
Guest chapter 12 . 2/7/2021 If you feel you have to change someone you're really not in love with them |
Guest chapter 12 . 2/7/2021 You Bastard! I'm done with you and your fucking stories. Killing Hedwig was just idiocy, it doesn't move the plot along or add anything to the story, it was just a useless fucking ploy |