Reviews for Harry Potter and the Spiritus Crystalus |
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Guest chapter 7 . 4/21/2019 Good |
Shadow315 chapter 8 . 1/14/2019 This is the one thing that bothered me a lot in this story. Okay, I get that you turned Wan around, but Fumbles should not have interfered. What about the 1e yr old girl that was aasultes and nearly raped? What about Harry, who - because of her messing with his cream - was tortured nearly to insanity? She shouldve been expelled and sent to prison! It's like saying it's okay to give her a slap on the wrist. Yeah, she was manipulated, but it doesn't excuse her behavior. There are consequences and what she did should've seen harsher consequences. |
nicole.howe.737 chapter 16 . 12/30/2018 I loved every word and have just spent the last 4 days reading both stories with many laughs had and many tissues used! Thankyou for sharing your time and imagination :) |
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 16 . 12/16/2018 Farewell Absent friends |
escapistictendencies chapter 16 . 10/3/2018 Mushy bits are too sweet for my cold shrivelled up heart but otherwise I love this AU, I especially love the ocs and hope they get their own stories *nudge nudge*, and your pace and writing style is a delight to read. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Can't wait to read moooore |
Qarz chapter 5 . 7/29/2018 The story is really good and your writing as well but i really have trouble accepting the Harry/Ginny relationship. Ginny gets away with so much and Harry always instantly (or almost instantly) forgives her and everything is okay. I already greatly disliked the moment when she attempted to fix the rift that her constant hexing and assaulting of him created in the last book and the next morning she does it again when she pulls on his ear as if he was a small child. In this chapter she does something unforgivable for a stupid reason and when she is finally given a reality check Dumbledore pulls out a spell out of his ass and everything is sunshine and rainbows once again because Harry is so much in love with her. The relationship you portray here doesn't work at all and is abusive towards Harry. |
JustAnotherDamagedSoul chapter 1 . 7/8/2018 Kinda pissing me off coz it’s all Ron and Hermione’s fault really and yet they’ve turned it on Ginny, made her feel like shit. |
JustAnotherDamagedSoul chapter 1 . 7/8/2018 Hold on a second Ronald. Why the fûck is it Ginny’s fault and YOUR girlfriend had ppl look after Ginny. Hermione was the one in the wrong there. She needs to stop sticking her nose in other ppls business. Ginny can look after herself and Harry can look after her too. Hermione knows how Ginny feels abt it as her best friend should know. |
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 16 . 6/25/2018 Really enjoyed this story and the previous one. Great job! |
Miss Millie chapter 16 . 5/20/2018 Hello, this is the 3rd or 4th time I've read your stories. Just to let you know I edited them so I didn't slip up and read something I shouldn't when I read them to my great grandchildren, or they read them themselves. I know we wont get any more stories I just wanted you to know how much a H&G fan I am. Good Luck In Your Next Great Adventure. your friend Miss Millie |
Daniel2398 chapter 16 . 5/7/2018 I read both books of this series on 2 days. Some of the best fanfic I have read so far. Can’t wait to look through your other books |
Gabby chapter 1 . 4/10/2018 I know you don't like these types of reviews but Don't you mean Ginny attempted to smooth out Harry's hair? |
fantasyinmymind chapter 16 . 2/5/2018 Impressive work - well done! |
michaelcifer1991 chapter 3 . 11/13/2017 You said in your A/N at the bottom. her actual name is Ginerva...well according to the books (which I have read over 20 times each) it's Ginevra. G-I-N-E-V-R-A. Check any source you like and THEN tell us what is correct. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2017 The movie was Disney's Hercules Am I right. Good movie loved it when it came out |