Reviews for Harry Potter and the Realization of Fate
Guest chapter 20 . 9/21
Grammar should be checked!

Spelling and the proper word used!

Scene should be seen!
Guest chapter 19 . 9/21
Spelling and grammar! Do a spell check!
rowenasheir chapter 1 . 9/21
Indifference is worse than hate. I learnt that through RL. Dislike, hate, wanting revenge are all emotions but the opposite of love is not hate but the absolute emptiness of indifferece. Just not caring about that person at all. You don't care if they are around or not, whether they are happy or sad. heir presence and actions do not create anger or joy, just indifference. The way you see a boring inanimate object.
Guest chapter 14 . 9/18
Neville wants to be a herbologist - NOT a healer!
Guest chapter 13 . 9/18
So hermione and Ron are up to stealing (again!) from Harry! Bitch and Bastard!

So why does that bastard dumbledork get away with calling Harry Harry? He does not call any other student by their first name!

Room of Requirement - NO “S”!

Since when are there portraits in the RoR? WTF
Guest chapter 12 . 9/18
Just because Ron is stupid to take divination does not mean Ginny is stupid to take that class! She is smarter than that! To listen to a lazy arse about which class to take? WTF

You moved the Room if Requirement?
Guest chapter 11 . 9/18
Wind thru his hair? It’s too short to even notice!
Guest chapter 9 . 9/17
You sure write Ginny to be bi-polar! Calm her down! She is on Harry’s side!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/25

Cut your paragraph length! They are TOO LONG,!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/24
Ginny feinted? She is strong and would never feint!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23
Your paragraphs are WAY too long!

How did Ron get Harry’s wand? Why would the ministry give him the wand? They would have snapped it!

You can’t train to be a metamorpgagus - you are born that way!
lunadream13 chapter 27 . 8/4
Good story, hope you continue it. chapter 1 . 7/29
nice story please finish
Death Lantern chapter 9 . 7/13
The revenge is not as fierce as it should have been.
Nicol chapter 27 . 6/8
And u will finish this when...?
U gave ur word...
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