Reviews for Breathe
hitomi-reitsuki chapter 3 . 5/11/2006
So really cool, I love your fic. Im really going to keep an eye on this one, but when are you planning to update it? ._. I hope you do so soon. It is kind of creepy watching Amon in such a situation. รณ_o nods
Amcreva chapter 3 . 4/9/2006
I love this Fan Fic. I hope you keep it up. I have a song for you.

Aimee Mann - Wise Up

I personally would like to extend my hand in helping you write this. .

Love what you have so far, I love the whole thing. I also like how you have build up around that characters. I hope to see the next chapter soon.

((If not, then E-mail me and we can discuss some plotlines.))
Mini Nicka chapter 3 . 2/26/2006
Love it so far so more please
jasmine3883 chapter 3 . 2/26/2006
You have to keep with this srory, Great storyline no OOC-ness.
young wiccan chapter 3 . 2/24/2006
really? I liked the second chapter, I was waiting for the next chapter for so long, so this was pretty good. I love the idea of Amon cutting himself (o_O that didn't come out right) but I love tragic romances (or semi-tragic romances) so I think this story is awesome, mostly I really want to know what happens next, will Robin help Amon?
Different Child chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
I love it. It speaks to me. It says a lot. I've had writers block recently and this is helping me get out of it.
AlwaysForgotten chapter 2 . 10/23/2005
Hm, I wouldn't use a song if I were you. Actually, I hate to tell ya this but...I don't pay any attention to the songs, I skip over them. :D
Different Child chapter 2 . 9/22/2005
It's been several months, pleasee continue!
Secret411 chapter 2 . 8/12/2005
i personally like hilary duffs new song wake up especially at the begining when she is singind"there's people talk about know my name they think they know they don't know anythin about me a dance floor give me a dj,give me a record forget what they say cause i need to go i need to get aaway tonight...there is more so if you want the song email me at i hope you update soon this is a good story
Kyoru-chan chapter 2 . 7/26/2005
Some songs you could use:

Nobody's Home by Avril Lavigne

Fall to Piecces by Avril Lavigne

Scars by Papa Roach

Let Me Go by 3 Doors Down

~ Silver Miko Kagome
Kyoru-chan chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
This story has an extremley startling resemblance to Flashback Love by HuntressRaven. But its not to bad nonetheless.
Swastika chapter 2 . 6/8/2005
Please update soon!

I like it.
Jenishi chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
I found you on fanfiction... It's Jenishi-kumiko from deviant... I was shocked to see your name on fanfiction... But I like the story! *wink* Read mine you have a chance! Witch Hunter Robin! lol!
Micayasha chapter 2 . 5/25/2005
don't do a song next time, if you have to... just please, update! :'(
Master Thief chapter 2 . 5/10/2005

OK...your story's cool...keep it up
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