Reviews for Playtime
smileyfox5150 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Beautifully, fantastically, terribly, downright murderous! You have a way with words. A few things were slightly confusing, such as the aspect where his cloak and hat blends in with the wall, only a bit distracting, but astounding nonetheless. I hope you can create another, preferably based on Reala or NiGHTS herself? Just a thought. :]
ThunderRiver411 chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
This is a great story. check out mine sometimes if you like.
RazorCardz01 chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
way too creepy of an ending, BUT I still love it!
Feniiku chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
o, nice description... i wish i could write discriptions like that.
The NightDragon chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
Ooh, VERY nice! I love the descriptions, and the menace is great!

It was a great pleasure to read. :)
Quatrina Raberba chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Ooh! Beautifully abstract, lending it a sense of foreboding and creepiness. You portray Jackle in an interesting way. XD I like it! Keep up the great work!