|Reviews for Following the Footsteps of Destiny|
| Neko Haruko chapter 282 . 7/20
with the talk of the digivices light combining. I wonder if you will make these kids DNA digivolve as well.
| Neko Haruko chapter 281 . 7/20
I love how you write daichi and ryoko. I wish they would hurry up and just kiss already. The same feelings I have for TaiChi and Yamato. lol
| KumoFuzei chapter 38 . 7/19
Poor Dai. But he's still his proud self.
Kara will hopefully calm down Tay and the others. She's a bit of a motherly figure.
A nice chapter and the one I'm going to finish with and go to bed :)
| KumoFuzei chapter 37 . 7/19
Alopemon and Ryoko have a nice bond already.
Ryoko is kissing Dai? O.o Oh, I read it wrong, he was kissing Kara. I was baffled for a moment there, haha.
DarkAngelicmon is definitely going to make a move soon.
| KumoFuzei chapter 36 . 7/19
I liked how Gabrielmon Digivolved to protect Ryoko. It was a nice twist and it symbolished Mickey's kind heart.
The Dai and Ryoko thing felt a little forced at the start there. I know it's a big thing between them but it can't be all everyone talks about.
So Gabrielmon has the hax ability that MagnaAngemon has? I wonder if there's limits on it.
| KumoFuzei chapter 35 . 7/19
I'm straight back to find out how that ending panned out.
Wow Gabrielmon unleashed. I wonder if there's a DarkGabrielmon too.
| KumoFuzei chapter 34 . 7/19
I really got the fear of the situation that they could die. It was like a baby horror movie. Kinda scary but not terrifying.
A nice cliffhanger ending :D
| KumoFuzei chapter 33 . 7/19
The Noah bit was nice but it felt a little unnecessary to the story.
BlackWidowmon is a bit of an idiot, thankfully.
| KumoFuzei chapter 32 . 7/19
I like having all the old helpers of the Adventure lot coming back.
The joke about Takara yelling made me smirk.
The callback to him and Leomon was cute. I think you get just the right amount of mentions without it overpowering the OCs.
| KumoFuzei chapter 31 . 7/19
Ryoko is such a softy.
Alopemon is like a callback to Garurumon, sorta. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not but I kinda like it.
| KumoFuzei chapter 30 . 7/19
So they can pick where they go this time? Curious.
Time for Ryoko's Digimon :3
| KumoFuzei chapter 29 . 7/19
Sorry about the short reviews. I'm mainly just reading and focussing on that rather than giving detailed feedback. I hope you don't mind.
Haha, I love this. Two rival kid factions. One trying to find out what the other is up to, probably having no idea what they're actually doing.
Shadow is adorable.
| KumoFuzei chapter 28 . 7/19
Yup, back again straight away. I may actually catch up one day.
A great little chapter. And they were nearly caught already. I suppose it won't be a punishment if they do get caught as their parents know about Digimon too.
| KumoFuzei chapter 27 . 7/19
Wow this is a long one!
So they're all like Monster of the week at the moment. I wonder when the big baddies will get their act together.
I bet DarkAngelicmon is a beast. I can see a battle between him and Angelicmon for sure.
You said you've rewritten this chapter and you can really tell. It's a very strong chapter.
Takara's description of Dai was adorable. I love that little tween love thing. It's written so cutely.
And the whole Ryoko/Dai thing is a very nice character arc you have going on.
A cute little chapter.
| KumoFuzei chapter 26 . 7/19
Someone finally had a go at the two of them, haha.
Sam's father's past could come back to haunt him I see.
Another nice chapter. I like how they feel like little TV episodes and wrap up nicely at the end of each one.