|Reviews for Lost|
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/27/2012
please continue this story even thought i doubt youd return after 6 please continue
| RomanticSoul693 chapter 8 . 7/26/2010
wow! such a good story! more please :( i see its been...a long time lol
| bethyboomarch2 chapter 8 . 5/18/2009
Oh, this is beautiful! I love how you have made the characters...they are so true to that of Joseph Fiennes and Gweneth Paltrow. Great job! I'm very excited for more!
Smiles and Hugs,
| chase young's daughter chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Update soon, i love your style of witing c
| Princess Kelso chapter 8 . 8/20/2007
aww i like thi story so far. i really like the movie, and i can see this story going somewhere
| menage a trois chapter 8 . 7/30/2007
LOVE it love the movie love the story lol keep it up
| brezzybrez chapter 8 . 3/28/2007
| corpsebridesmaid chapter 8 . 1/16/2007
Wow, this is very well written. I really like the way the characters speak-it stays true to the movie, and the time period. I have only two suggestions:
"Alright" is not a word, so all instances chould be changed to "all right."
The chapter name Promise you won't scream should be in quotation marks, since a character says it in the chapter(otherwise it gives the wrong impression to readers-I thought someone was going to die or something!"
Otherwise, your Fan Fic is very good, and I look forward to reading more
| SauvignonFierce chapter 8 . 9/18/2006
wow that was awesome! loving it totally so far! update soon!
| queen cleo chapter 8 . 7/3/2006
| gonzo the muppet chapter 8 . 7/2/2006
| theblondeone07 chapter 8 . 5/3/2006
I wish this is what would have happened in the movie! I love the movie! I really like where you are going with this story! I hope you will update soon!
| Captain Jenny Flint chapter 8 . 4/1/2006
I like the plot so far and need you to keep writing im afraid. XD
| Fictitious Character chapter 8 . 3/23/2006
you've got a nice plot here, and your characters are definitely getting stronger as the chapters keep flowing. YMy only criticism is that your story seems to jump around a little bit, try to keep it from rushing about from plot to plot. On the whole though, a fantastic story. Please update soon!
| corrina chapter 8 . 2/26/2006
this is so awsome! they should make a movie out of YOUR story! PLEASE continue cuz ill die if you dont! keep up the good work!