Reviews for Generations Book 3: Shades Of Grey
shadowebb chapter 12 . 8/2/2013
Hmmm... Bryn and Blaise or Bryn and Harry? I can't choose!
NarwhalLover chapter 3 . 11/22/2007
I think the sorting hats song was good, i mean who can rhyme?
NarwhalLover chapter 2 . 11/22/2007
I relly like it! Culd she be sirius dother? mayby, maby not...
satoshii chapter 2 . 7/13/2007
Interesting story.

You have a great idea for it; your grammar and spelling are absolutely perfect. and you've developed a nice character. )

The thing is, Bryn sounds too perfect, like a Mary Sue. I'm really sorry, but from all of the stories I've read, this is definitely a Mary Sue - a transfer student from America, who is obviously gorgeous, practices a kind of magic that no one has ever heard of, obviously has a secret she is keeping, a past, and is automatically on friendly terms with Harry Potter.

Some people do like Mary Sues - don't worry. It's just that I'm not one of those people. I hope you're not discouraged by my review; I just thought I'd tell you how I think of it. That's what reviews are for, ne? Well, anyway, keep writing; you have the potential to be a good writer. You just have to look... outside the box, you could say. )
JusticeIsBlind13 chapter 28 . 2/24/2007
This story was a well written story. While I mostly read L&O:SVU & L&O:CI fics, this one was a welcomed change.
icedragon404 chapter 28 . 8/16/2006
OMG! That was so good. I love the whole story line. I can't wait to read the sequel. i do have one request though. I would love it if you could work on Jian's book a little more. I've been waiting a while for it. Thanks,

Jordan
sweet-babie-phoenix chapter 28 . 8/14/2006
hey awesome chapter!

yah sorry i didn't review some of the other chapters i was with out internet accsess for a few weeks (

but yah i can't wait for the sequil!
callmeGreen-Eyes chapter 28 . 7/29/2006
that's the end? ack! i hope not.

but if it is, you are a cruel cruel writer.

i
whyworryxxx chapter 28 . 7/29/2006
i am basiaclly cross-eyed and blind now becasue i have been reading this story for so long and i have finally finished it! yes! but i cant wait to read the sequal and how you managed to fit everything in to what JKR wrote is seriously amazing.
whyworryxxx chapter 2 . 7/29/2006
i am seriously jealous of your story. haha. you've managed to make a sincere plot just like JKR that is intersting. i envy you. lol
whyworryxxx chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
i really like it so far. it is well written and the really cool thing about it is that the plot is similar to mine and it is interesting to see how you go about the same thing.
lime 63 chapter 28 . 7/29/2006
Short enough chapter? HeHe, Tamora Pierce! Cool ending! Write more soon please!
lime 63 chapter 27 . 7/29/2006
Harry can apperate. Not legally, but he can. Also could the observer be Lupin?, it would kinda make sense. The part about the snails is SO true! They're gross. I LOVED the part with Tonks and the Dursleys! Also, why does she need an Animagus potion?
lime 63 chapter 26 . 7/29/2006
Was that her dad? If it was I will hug you out of happiness, then stab you in the heart! Because he won't help, and just sits by while watching her. Also just how long is this story going to get? Though I'm asking out of curiosity not because it's boring or anything. It's getting more interesting as it goes!
lime 63 chapter 25 . 7/29/2006
but they were such a cute couple! I still think she should tell her friends about her parents. I really liked this chapter, though. You did a good job at portraying emotions.
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