Reviews for Trial and Error
FabulousSleepyHead chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
So funny how Hiei had to babysit Kurama. I bet Kurama was adorable!
liting791 chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
haha, really cute story! thaxxxx
Reyka chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Hah, I'd wondered what those "tests" might be like! Nice! (Also, Hiei babysitting is hilarious.)
AssassinedAngel chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Omgggg. This is brilliant. Not only is this incredibly unique (possibly the most unique Yu Yu Hakusho fanfic I have ever stumbled upon) but you kept both Hiei and Kurama perfectly in character, which seems incredibly hard given your plot, but nonetheless, you pulled it off with splendid writing.
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
That was hilarious, I loved it and great job

Poor Hiei, probably got a headache
YamiReigen chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
LMAO XD Poor Hiei
mimi-chan and aliling-chan chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
All three transformation is quite hilarious especially Hiei. He was more like pleading to god that he won't want another kid to babysit.I laughed myself to death already!
CriticOfMany chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Awesome. I love it.

I always wondered what tests He did and how they went.

I loved that Hiei was holding baby Kurama sooo funny.

Very good story. You can't find good non yaoi stories like this one.

CritcOfMany
DragonFire44 chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Cute! I loved the first transformation the best. I thought it was well written, wish it was longer! Though about Hiei's tear gem I thought he didn't have it till he met Mukuro? I was sure he lost it and didn't have it during the tournament.
DELETED ACCOUNT HERE chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Aw. That was adorable! .
GoldenRat chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Various cute baby!Kuramas and Hiei as babysitter!
loretta537 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
this was good, hiei was so cute taking care of the kids
Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Nicely done! Who knew Hiei was such a good babysitter.

-D101
Kat1132 chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Amazing and absolutely adorable! I loved the first transformation the most. I'm really glad I got to read this. Thanks!
Spirit Seer chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Wow. This is completely awesome. I think there were a couple of missing periods, but that was the biggest mistake I saw. Excellent work! :D You did an awesome job; it was really hilarious, and I loved it. _ I need to make sure I go and thank Phantom Kat 7 again. She recommended this story to me. :)

It was really awesome. As another reviewer mentioned, you really kept them In Character. Kudos! And I loved the part about Hiei's Day Care. XD Those sections were so hilarious. This whole story was so awesome. You did fantastic, fantastic work. I really take my hat off to you. This is truly a work of art. :)
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