Reviews for Evolution
Avid reader chapter 10 . 12/14/2014
This is a wonderful story! Both POV's and the tragedy and romance falling smoothly in place. Man, you are a greater writer. Thank you for posting this and I really enjoyed this story immensely.
no-one chapter 10 . 3/11/2013
this is still 1 of my favorites. Can't tell you how much I appreciated it after reading it again and again. Dare say better each time as well.

ty and I wish you and a few other authors would come back to write more shizunatsu soon.
DancingFireStar chapter 10 . 2/27/2013
This story was amazing but I'm sad I never read it until now. It should have been tagged with Shizuru an Natsuki.
Static Summer chapter 10 . 2/24/2013
I don't like familial drama as much as I love angst in a developing relationship. However, after reading the 4th chapter, I expected to finish this story feeling pissed off and dissatisfied, but I didn't.

Very well written. :)
annoyingLONER chapter 10 . 12/18/2012
let's just thank God that Jun is dead . thanks for the fic
Guest chapter 10 . 8/7/2012
hmmmm . .great!
bubble.duckie chapter 10 . 4/24/2011
Awww! A happy ending! I was at the edge of my seat not knowing if the ending will be happy or what. I'm glad to at that reading the epilogue made me smile XD
bubble.duckie chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
One word, "Whaaaaaat!"
bubble.duckie chapter 3 . 4/24/2011
Oh my! I can feel tears welling up in my eyes now. Just the right amount of angst and drama. I sure hope that this has a happy ending!
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
The sincerity and the finality of Shizuru's farewell is really moving.
il0vesunfl0wers chapter 10 . 8/17/2009
Aw. It was sad at first how their yo-yo relationship would not seem to happen, and how they were separated for a year, and THEN 6 years! Ouch! Then to finally be together again, only to risk losing it all again, this time over risking the loss of having one's child. I'm glad to see that Shizuru found someone new to give her undying love for, so much that she would never give her up for anyone, "not even Natsuki" - and how true that is. I'm just glad Natsuki gave that butthead a piece of her mind, and that in time he opened up his mind about their relationship so that they can have it all. Yay!

“How about Natsuki-mama?” LOL. I'd have paid to see the look on her face, myself! *snicker* Good job!
parikesit n1nna chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
i really love this story. they're breathtaking ! i overwhelm by the emotions and this story made me want to write some about shiznat. i joined this FF bcoz of your story. thank you, you're inspiring me
yui1808 chapter 10 . 8/7/2008
wow... what a very interesting story... they have been through good and bad times... and would you imagine that, shizuru's been in love with natsuki since high school... it was love at first sight then first love never die and then forever in love... what more could you ask for? well for me i like a sequel... hell yeah, give us a sequel... thanks a lot author for this story...
20Below chapter 4 . 8/3/2008
Did she just say Mommy? She was talking to the person behind Shizuru right?...right?

Ah you keep on twisting the plot! Haha its great XD
20Below chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Finally! A story that addresses 'that' night between Natsuki and Shizuru. Can't wait to see where you take this, im already itching to read the rest XD
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