Reviews for Orange
Pink Illusion chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
I hate most femmeslash, but this is extremely well written. Most femmeslash fics are forced and this is sublime.
0'EmeraldEyes'0 chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
The sexual tension is overwhelming lol.
silent-voices chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Wonderfully done. Very beautifully written, with a lovely imagery and a nice descriptive language. One little detail I especially loved was how the colour of the orange clashed with Lavender's red nail polish.

This is actually one of the few stories where a lack of quotation marks is appropriate.
werechick chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Nice, very sly.
Kelly chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
Neat. I liked the style you wrote in; you've got talent. I felt like I was in the common room watching all this. It was really vivid, flowed smoothly, and the premise was clever. Wonderful work, keep it up.
creativebane chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
Definitely like this fic; beautiful language – at some parts you used too much description/too many words so it didn’t always flow quite right... But other that, loved it. Sensational imagery. I wish I could write like this.
draca chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
omg... it's beautiful! I love the perfect length, the lack of quotation marks, and your flowing style that is easy to read. And most of all the end!