(sighs happily) I'd have to say this is one of the best Bakura/Ryou fics I've read. Some parts might be read as OOC, but Ryou wasn't a naive idiot, and Bakura wasn't overly fluffy or dark. I could see them interacting in this way, clever concept on Ryou building and Bakura destroying. Very, very nice fic. Not really fluffy, but still leaves you with a content feeling after you've read it.

I gotta say, this is one of the best fics I've read. I mean, the symbolism, the charater interaction, top notch stuff right there. Also, the simple explanations were easy to understand without compromising the integrity of the story. I really hate long winded, detail oriented explanations that are made just to take up space. The set-up of both the structure of the story and the way it was written are very well done too.

Pretty much, I have only nice things to say about this fic. Great job!

will you be continuing this? if you are, i'll be waiting!

Very nice introspective. Ryou building and Bakura destroying just seems to fit. And I really liked how you didn't make Ryou all naive and innocent that it was annoying. Coldly contemplative and polite is more of a good fit.

The fact that Bakura used his deck to make card houses was a nice touch as well. I like that, it makes is seem more... real, or something like it.

-Cj

A very nice and introspective fic of Bakura and Ryou. I love those two, they are so insanelly opposite and this fic really made that stand out. The last line made my fangirl heart melt. Keep writing, this is fantastic.

Oh, I love this fic. So beautifully written, and I understand well your logic. This fic has a feel to it, as if it really, really MEANS something. I hope I can express myself well enough for you to understand. In some parts tears formed to my eyecorners, I'm not even sure why. Usually I cry at very angsty fics, but this is not angst, this just bluntly states the truth, and I guess truth can be right as sad as dramatic angst. Now I'm rambling again, but what I'm trying to say is, that this fic really got me thinking. Thank you very very mutch.

Fenella R.

that was really sweet and touching. ] I liked it.

A very well-thought out fic. I'm impressed. The writing style was unique, and every line seemed to have a special meaning. I. Love. It.

...Beautiful. And strange, and somehow a touch unsettling, but one of the best representations of Bakura and Yami Bakura's relationship I've seen.

The balance works really well in this case, each one clearly a compliment, but a more complex case than the general portrayal, with yami as all the darker traits and hikari with all the virtues...

You've done a fantastic job. I am awed.

This is really good! I'm sorry I can't offer any more constructive comments, but I enjoyed it immensely!

Its beautiful. It made my heart hurt. Strange, I don't usually get emotional...

Wonderful. Just wonderful.

I really love this...

and yeah..

*speechless*

Sorry, um..*still speechless* I wish i had better words to describe it but simply, I love it

elegant and beautiful. This made a bad day much better.

wow u really looked into this and i must say it is an excellent fic! :D

Very nice, well thought out. And I love how you explain your motives at the end. Most authors don't do that - me include.

It's nice.