There is no other way to say it. It is absolutely brilliant and totally deep. It rulz! We need more of these!

Wow, this is beautiful. The way it repeats itself, Ryou building, Bakura destroying, the sound of the cards falling (I particularly liked the parts about that one, the way it’s so silent)– and their dialogue between is awesome!

“(...)figuring that diplomacy is overrated anyway” : I love that part, I actually can’t imagine Ryou ever thinking that – except when it’s about talking to Bakura

Oh, and I liked Dark Necrophia – I can’t quiet tell why, but it made me all happy when I red it’s their last card (and change of hearth’s overused!)

(I don’t think Bakura’s right when he calls Ryou weak though, and your author note seems to say he is; after all, Ryou _did_ put up with a crazy spirit in his mind, and fought him successfully. He’s an impressive person)

Good!

I like it...

Only...I don't really get it...

meh

it's a really nice and sweet story, I mean, the way you explain it, they are the perfect exemple for the ying and yang ...

I LOVE YOU! Nothing else to say. I think I clearly stated my opinion of this fic...

-Miso

v. nice. I always gave the cards & their owners a little thought whenever I watched YGO, but not like this. Also, I never had much memories for the cards/strategies, ha. It was a v. good read, in any case. Thank you.

This is wonderful. Everything I love about tendershipping is right here, including their occult deck and their shared dreams... And so beautifully written, too. Thank you.

Wow... and I mean, seriously, just, wow.

This is quite possibly the best thing I have ever read. I finished reading another one of your stories a little while ago and considered looking at your other works, and now I'm convinced. I have to.

I often can only describe fan fiction in obscure things you don't normally relate to stories, so here are some for this: Grey, white, soft, feather, clear, depth, layered. I know it doesn't make much sense, so just ignore my slight mental problems -;

Off to read more of your works,

~ Alice

again, lovely work.

i especially love the syntax and structure of that last section. the alternating ( ) and...

ok, you know what? you are brilliant, woman. Please marry me.

long but cool

Wow...

Just, wow. Incredible. You gave reasoning as to why Bakura and Ryou are a whole! *bows to you!*

Great fanfic _ I like building card houses but i can't cbuild a house with just three I need at least five. Two cards balanced with each other then two more next to them and the fifth one on top of the two colums formed by the first four cards. I once build a cute little card kindom with a 40 card castle, I'm probably out of practice now XD Anyway cute story. :)

I like this. This is cute.

Very cleaver! It was written really well too! Cute ending! n_n

wow, this was really good. it did help that you actually looked up what you were writing. well, it added to it, the story in itself was good enough though. i liked the way you balanced them. you have obviously put a lot of thought into this...now im gonna feel stupid if you havent. well anyway. keep writing, i love this style.