Reviews for PositiveTension
zeonista13 chapter 1 . 3/1/2017
This is a rather sweet piece. It's nice to have a story about the Sannin before they fractured for good, before the Third War ruined their chemistry as a team. Having Sakuo & Jiraiya be friends is an interesting twist, but I can buy it. Konoha is not large, and the shinobi corps must have interacted a lot.
Amanthya chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
...That was amazing! I can't believe how well you pulled that parallel off without being corny. Good job! And especially for the ending. : )
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
I love how you wrote this!
Vaughn Tyler chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
The Leaf 180 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
the loser has to write a DIRTY book!"

fiesa chapter 1 . 4/17/2010

A really nice, wonderful story... I like the way you set the parallels between the two generations of shinobi

Especially the "familiar joke" about Kakashis hair was a lot of fun, but also the hint at why Jiraiya writes dirty books... *laugh*

And the end - with Naruto chosing his own path - is perfect. A really, really nice story - but I said that already, did I
skepsis66 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
I like how you've drawn distinctive parallels and disparities between the Sannin's generation & Naruto's generation. It's fascinating how certain moments can repeat themselves over and over, yet with small variations that make all the difference in the end.
ladywinterfic chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
whoa. this is kinda excellent. patterns and how they are broken. very nice!
Shubhs chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
That was cutely-sweet...XP XD XD
sagemode184562 chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
very nice
RedRedRosy chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
Sakumo's oppinion of that long hair was just too much, I'm STILL laughing. Great fic, deffinately worth reading.
Ikabi chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
I had to refrain from laughing out loud (the librarian was giving me Very Angry Looks XD ) when the second section started, because I knew almost exactly what was coming. And I absolutely LOVE the bet Sakumo and Jiraiya made. It's too funny and ironic for words.
Nukumi chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
“To me they totally scream ‘I’m such a kick-ass ninja I don’t need your weak, safety hair. Watch me as I flick my awesome mullet into your face, puny shinobi!’”
Eldr-Fire chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Ah, absolutely /loved/ it. Possibly my favorite of all of your stories. It made me laugh, nearly made me cry, and the parallels were heart-wrenching at time.

Genius, I say!


Quill chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
I can see this fit into the canon story... good job!
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