Reviews for Breakdown
Tony chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
Very well done Rel, possibly a bit wordy on some of the description but still very articulate. I liked it, I thought it was gunna be about Sirus for a second...but Ron. Hmm very good
no one chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
aw! I hate angst but this is soo good! I was in such suspense of what was going on to make him sad. It could have been something about sirius but then everybody does that one. Trust you to be original!

bon travail!

san
ChangedOne chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
wow i was not expecting that ending at all...very well done, well written, excellent idea.