|Reviews for Returning Home|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/4
Not bad but if the whole story is written with sentenced starting with : she , he or someone's name, it's going to become annoying really fast. But the plot in it's self sound okay, if not a little marysue-ish
| Amu4ever chapter 1 . 2/27
I really like your story. Actually it's very humbling to be able to read a - so far - logically based Girl-in-middle earth story. That she is an elleth only makes it better...
If she was an elfling instead, it had be perfect :)
(There are not nearly enough good elfling stories out there. A few great ones sure..., but not nearly enough! )
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/31/2015
I find it really annoying when writers try so hard for their character not to be a Mary-Sue that the OC turns out to be more annoying because of the flaws.
| Anon chapter 53 . 6/24/2015
What a wonderful tale... but the ending makes me think of exactly why could not bear to be immortal... unless, of course, it was to be with Legolas XD
| ViewerOfTheMany chapter 53 . 4/26/2015
To start, I'm going to first point out that this story was not "bad". I've read a lot worse stories in my day. However, I was not very impressed with most of the content in this Fan Fiction. Developing a romantic connection between a Canon character and an original character is not an easy thing to do, and I believe you could have done it a lot better. Aria was a very awful MarySue and often left me cringing at the thing she said and did. Half of the time I was convinced I was reading a Lord of The Rings/Avatar: The Last Airbender crossover. There were some obvious flaws with her powers and MarySue-ish-ness. She had NO imperfections. Why would Legolas fall for her before they even truly knew eachother? That confused me. Anothet topic: Grammar/Content... Almost half of the story I was saying 'huh?' Or 'what did that mean?'. It took away from the plot and seed of the story. I'm sorry, but I do not think I will be stopping by to read anymore of your Legolas/blatantly-obvious-MarySue fics again.
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/25/2014
Oh dear. I was struggling with this since you gave your Mary Sue main character ridiculous superpowers, but you know what finally put me off continuing your story? "Yes! A million times yes!" Gag.
| Tauriel117 chapter 53 . 2/2/2014
Hello, there! I know you finished this story in 2005 and I am writing this in 2013, but I love your story. Please,write more! And LegolasOC are even better. I am myself a huge fan of The Lord of the Rings.
| ChristinaAguileraFan chapter 53 . 12/24/2013
Absolutely amazing story!
| EternalLoveDreamer chapter 53 . 11/23/2013
Such a lovely story! :) I enjoyed reading it very much so thank you for writing it! 3
| misuky7 chapter 53 . 11/20/2013
This was breathtaking, and very well written. The chapters were many but not too long. I adore this story. I am sad their friends died but excited that they had Maldamiriel and Maldor. :3
| AliceMiceva chapter 53 . 6/12/2013
Oh my God, I'm crying! It's beautiful! You're awesome!
| SCREAMM chapter 53 . 1/3/2013
| RedStalkingDeath chapter 24 . 7/29/2012
Aww, how lovely
| ariah23 chapter 53 . 7/3/2012
just truly amazing!
| Udumuhv chapter 53 . 4/10/2012
Yay, managed to finish it in one day!xD
I'm too tired to leave a long review (it's about 3am now), so only one word: AMAZING!:)