|Reviews for Devil Child|
| Rebecca Rivera chapter 1 . 9/19
Please continue this story I love it and make sure it has an happy ending.
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/11/2013
wow what's with the 'if! if is good.' part I remember Panic for the disney Hercules movie saying it whenever he and Main got in trouble. Well I'm sue it'll be really funny with Sister Kate scolding them about the Magdale Order not being a baby devil orphanage. I'm sure that in the end of this fic Rosette and Chrno won't mind having a baby of their own *giggles*
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/11/2013
Great story I though that the mate (female) of the alpha was called beta.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 17 . 8/9/2012
This is almost exactly like the chapter from the manga. Ahh that was very amusing. Thought I am sure that the source of the problem now is Chrono's beloved brother Aion. Things are getting exited I can't wait for the next chapter :D keep up the good work.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 16 . 8/9/2012
Lolz I spy with my little eye a fullmetal alchemist xover in this chapter. XD So funny how Rosette was pointing her gun at Ed and when the others tryed to stop her from killing the children who were teasing the poor Aiden.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 15 . 8/9/2012
O.O wow another unexpected plot twist. Anyway when I was reading the part were Twitch and Nix I was thinking about a Pokemon battle.
Twitch a Salamence and Nix Moltres or Ho-Oh XD.
Kylik starts to remind me of Sephiroth from FFVII he also has a twisted mind that's been corrupted.
I hope Rosette and the others are fine. Ah I was wondering why didn't Aiden froze time to beat Kylik? She could have beaten him easy if she did that.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 14 . 8/9/2012
Crap and now everything will become worse. Kylik really has some weird obsession over his sister... I blame Lucifer for that. Poor Aiden is sealed and I am sure it feels very cold and lonely.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 13 . 8/9/2012
TT Poor girl. Chrono and Rosette must be devastated. They could try and find a way to seal her powers without sealing her.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
Lolz thanks for the funny explanation. It cleared up a lot of things XD.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 11 . 8/9/2012
That must be so painful. Poor Aiden she must feel scarred. I wonder how she was able to get Chrono's time freezing powers.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
Cool now she has a pet dragon. Funny how easily the others accepted it. Well knowing Rosette she wouldn't care less if the dragon is harmless to them.
I'm wondering if Aiden's personality will be a little bit like Rosette when she's older... if that happens then heaven will fall on earth XD.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 9 . 8/9/2012
Lolz omg the last part was hilarious. Just imagining the face of sister Kate and a scared Rosette makes my day already, thought I am surprised that a heavy sleeper as Rosette is able to wake up. Also I can't believe that Chrono is chasing someone in anger instead of getting chased.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 8 . 8/8/2012
Those special were cute and I can't believe she's growing that fast XD, but she's still cute. Poor Aiden has to cope with Rosette's snoring, at least she hasn't seen how it is when Rosette is woken up by Chrono throwing her out of the window. XD
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 7 . 8/8/2012
O.o seems like Aiden's twin grows faster than her.
I feel sorry for Chrono and the other being tired all the times... it's like trying to wake up in the morning. That's always hard for me.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 6 . 8/8/2012
Well at least they were able to hide her from sister Kate, but I guess that's the least problem they have at the moment.