|Reviews for Sunlight Effect|
| Kuroi Kiri chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
The TAKS is evil.
Oh, and nice fic.
| Starx chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Its a nice short fic.
| accountkiller2384678 chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
it was good
| FinalFantasyChick190 chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Another amazing Kirge by you. Keep it up. You know there can never be enough Kirges, lol. GO YOU.
| sayinjinj7 chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
Very nice. I really enjoyed it. All the characters were very well written, great job!
| Capella A. Morningside chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Finally! I was trying to review this for hours but the site was being evil...
I like stories like this: short and sweet. We can only hope Leena doesn't decide to get suspicious and follow Serge to the beach that day, eh? I can hear the cat-screeches now...
Anyway, I only saw one possible problem, and it's that your writing of Kid's particular dialect seemed a little awkward. I always find it's best to say things out loud while I am trying to write in dialect and make sure my spellings match as much as possible. Otherwise, great work, especially considering I don't like Kid/Serge.