Reviews for Very
MenrowSpirit chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
AW Poor Lloydie!

This was so cute
Baby Kat Snophlake chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
I kind of agree that Lloyd seems too smart for his age. I mean, it's Lloyd... Raine was excited when he remembered that geyser water is hot, and how old was he? 16, 17? But still it's a cute story.

Ilvinaeda chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Another shortie...but still beautiful. Captures the essence of loneliness that many feel on these "happy days," holidays which are dampened by some past tragedy or event.

Nice job. Poor guy...
Nameless chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
And I'm back once again... I hope you don't mind.

Heh... I don't like this one quite as much as the other two. It's not that it's bad, but it doesn't seem as powerful. Still, I like how little Lloyd misses his mother and follows the same ritual. It seems very much IC for him.

On the other hand, his thoughts seems very sophisticated for a four or five year old. He seems to be closer to nine or ten, in my opinion. That's a minor detail, though.

I hope you feel like writing again soon!
Teddy-the-Bear chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Wow...short, but sad. The thing is breaking my heart.
E.S. Simeon chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
Oh! This one is good! Good Lloyd is with Annaa, how nice, but what about Kratos?