|Reviews for Persistance of Vision|
| marinarathesauce chapter 1 . 12/8/2020
Ohhhh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Your writing is beautiful, I've laughed over this and smiled and hurt over this and just WOW. Your writing is beautiful. Truly. I've been going over all of your stories at least the ones in which I'm in the fandom and they're all amazing! THANK YOU.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2020
I can't let you know waht I think because I am bawling. this was so incredibly well written. every line, every sentence tore my heart up in all the right ways. I love how you included eveyrone else in Kakahs's lives as they slowly trickled in (maybe they've always been there. But its only some days kakashi sees or realizes and in turn Obito realizes and sees)
I loved how you showed little traits of team Minato in team 7, especialy the Rin and Sasuke bit. Just so beautiful
| Lynquine chapter 1 . 7/17/2018
I legit cried from this. I can't handle the emotions and the way you accurately depicted Kakashi's scars and his healing. I'm so sold by this that I had to remind myself that this isn't canon. Now I wish it was because I felt that grief and the "brokenness" of Kakashi and that shred of happiness at his happy ending. No doubt, a beautiful, heart-wrenching story
| calliopechild chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
SO this is great and also wildly painful. We see Kakashi talking to Minato and Obito and Rin at the Stone all the time, but I never really stopped to think about what it must be like for them to watch someone they care about so much falling apart, spending the rest of his life punishing himself for their deaths. What it's like, apparently, is a whole lot of OW. Your Kakashi is so broken, just like canon, and it's such a sad contrast between Obito's concern and strangers' wary disdain. This was a delightfully chilling line: "Not even Obito can see the things Kakashi sees when he shakes after missions and he feels guilty for being glad."
Also, "mercilessly omnipresent" is the greatest description of Gai I have ever heard and I adore it.
Fantastic job with this, I love it.
| ladeste chapter 1 . 4/1/2018
| the wizards-mafia chapter 1 . 3/4/2017
ALRIGHT I AM LEGITIMATELY CRYIN RN, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFUL (God I wish that this was how things turned out) THIS FIC IS A MASTERPIECE AND I AM SO GLAD I GOT TO READ IT
| Plouton chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
This is beautiful and I cried a little bit to be honest. People who write angst about Kakashi always seem to forget he has a mostly happy end, and I'm glad you wrote about his healing too.
| starsarebright chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
This is unquestionably gorgeous.
| matt-lea chapter 1 . 9/8/2016
This was so beautiful :) one of the best characterizations of kakashi I have read.
I got all teary-eyed from beginning to end.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
This was great, incredibly amazing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
I almost did not read the story because you mistakenly mentioned Torune instead of Obito. Please make the correction.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/6/2016
I love it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
Pls add on!
| littleditto chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
Why is Torune one of characters listed in the description. Shouldn't it be Obito?
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2016
Oh my god, I never review but you deserve just a big hug and a "thank you" because it was spectacular. Every word was right. Every emotion I think you wanted to portray I felt and you get Kakashi like a book - stellar job.