Reviews for Persistance of Vision |
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![]() ![]() Oh my god, I never review but you deserve just a big hug and a "thank you" because it was spectacular. Every word was right. Every emotion I think you wanted to portray I felt and you get Kakashi like a book - stellar job. |
![]() ![]() LOVE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful and so well-written! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it war amazing. You depicted Kakashi's struggles and emotions so wonderfully that i just... Yeah... Again. It was amazing. |
![]() ![]() It was nice, I needed something angsty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, I don't really know what to say. This story is... just... absolutely beautiful. I have tears in my eyes. It is so eloquently written, and just... God. Just... wow. Yeah. Thank you so freaking much for writing this. I sincerely feel as though reading this has enriched my day, my life, even. |
![]() ![]() I like it even if we know now how this all isn't true but it's rather too deep for my liking. life's shit, yeah we know it, but I don't want to read about someone else knowing that. I would rather have them happy and hopeful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is seriously the most beautiful thing ever written about Kakashi and his teammates. It had me crying, laughing, giggling, smiling, crying soms more- you conveyed the feelings wonderfully. Not to mention your way of writing is really nice and that you stayed in character. Loved it. |
![]() ![]() Oh my god I loved this I'm pretty sure I squeaked at the end |
![]() ![]() Oh wow! That was pretty brilliant! I was expecting something different but this is much better. :) ASR |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was crying at the beginning but at the end I was smiling again I really liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() SQUEEE SO GOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was beautiful. It was light, but bittersweet enough for it to strike some very deep chords. |