| Reviews for Persistance of Vision |
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   MVGLegend chapter 1 . 9/20/2012 That was absolutely wonderful. I loved your characterizations of Kakashi and Obito. The whole piece was just beautifully written :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2012 I cried... |
| angelrock444 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 Bbb |
| Loafy chapter 1 . 4/21/2012 I'm crying right now. This really hit me for some reason. I have always been pitiful of Kakashi, and sad that we don't learn more about him, his life and relationships from the story. This story not only shows those things, but is also well written and follows the canon (bonus points!). The emotional effect is not so much a sucker-punch, but a drawn out realization of the characters being portrayed. There are a few awkward phrases and other problems, but I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes. This story is emotive enough that all typos are easily forgiven. This is the best in-canon story about Kakashi I have ever read (even if it isn't entirely about Kakashi.) Please excuse me while I wipe mascara off my keyboard... Read! |
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/10/2012 I am absolutely blown away by this. This is a piece of masterpiece, and I'm very glad that you have written and shared it with us. Please continue writing :) |
| AriaJack chapter 1 . 1/23/2012 I love, I mean seriously love, this story. I've read it about a dozen times and bullied all my friends into reading it as well. This story is like a chocolate bar, as soon as you finish it you want to read more just like it. Sadly, there aren't really any more like it so you just have to read this one over and over and over again. It's that good. Bravo. |
| Seventeenth Shenanigan chapter 1 . 1/23/2012 This was really stinkin' deep. Nicely done. |
| Ravensoul chapter 1 . 10/18/2011 How sweet... *sniffle* |
| Fawn chapter 1 . 8/9/2011 I really like that all of this was from Obito's PoV. He can see Kakashi more clearly than anyone. The stages that his friend go through seem perfectly correct. This is all awesome. Well written. Good read. |
| Gamma Cavy chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 its a good story but kind of sad |
| Moenoke chapter 1 . 5/22/2011 I...LOVE IT! |
| Endless Knot chapter 1 . 4/28/2011 Well done for not going down Predictable Lane. This is great. |
| TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 Persistance of Vision is wonderfully written. I suppose Obito would be watching over Kakashi, wouldn't he? |
| oakleaf chapter 1 . 4/13/2011 Beautiful. It's really warm and fuzzy. I like the style and the plot, with the breaks. Well done! |
| onlydeadandgone chapter 1 . 4/10/2011 This was surprisingly sweet and insightful. A strange take on the relationships but it fit. |