Reviews for Light on the Water
Kentai chapter 3 . 6/13/2005
That's some awesome writing. I liked the dialog between Raine and Laguna and how he knows about her brother. Having Rose enter in was great too. I can see things coming together. It's very interesting. Couldn't stop reading it until I was finished. Very nice. )
Kentai chapter 2 . 6/1/2005
Raine is awesome. Great writing and descriptions of all the people. I like where the plot's going. Lots of emmotions and end of the world kind of things. It's really great. I really liked the scenes with Raine and Laguna too. It's nice to see how all these things fit together. Keep up the fantastic writing. )
Kentai chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Ooh. *Drools a bit* That's awesome. Very well written. Made me think about all kinds of stuff. And like I told ya, very professional. Great stuff.
Quistis88 chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Very nice prologue. :) Do update soon.
Saiyru chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Very well written prologue! I'm interested in hearing about the 1st Sorceress War and Laguna and Raine's relationship. Please update soon!