Reviews for Fata
Ligare chapter 3 . 2/11/2011
Thank you, I really appreciate it when a writer takes the effort to make his/her fanfiction tidy and easier to read.

Btw, why is it Eriol use so little magic for the more magical side of Clow's reincarnation? From Card Captor and XxxHolic I gather being magician is a pretty busy life. Their jobs come not only from humans and sometimes they can be really necessary.

So why is that Eriol is not doing his job? Sure, Eriol has the right to be pianist if he want to, but he has a duty to humankind as one of the most powerful magicians on earth to not completely forget his role. After all,I imagine the number of people who can be pianists exceeds by far the number of people who can stand on Eriol's shoes.
scissorscuttingonthe25th chapter 3 . 11/23/2007
i haven't read any fan fiction before fata, because i thought fan fictions alter the original story very weirdly. But i enjoyed reading fata and i can't help but imagine what will happen next! this one's superb! umai (is that correct- great)!

i'm looking forward for the story's next chapter(s).. ))

and thanks for a great read.
White Alchemist Taya chapter 3 . 3/23/2006

this is so good!

update soon!
Scarlet Amaranth chapter 3 . 3/18/2006
I lurve it! I like the idea of Tomoyo being a model, she's always behind the scenes so it's good that she's in the spotlight now-literally.

I look forward to the next update!
RequiemElise chapter 3 . 1/2/2006
Wonderful! Simply fantastic! I'm sorry it took me so long to review.-_-6 I really like this chapter you add so much depth to the characters its amazing!

write more soon!


greenbean1 chapter 3 . 12/12/2005
I absolutely love this story. It's so entralling and beautiful and wondyful aand and and... I love it. Wuv wuv wuv.


Please continue with it soon..?
lady orheal chapter 3 . 12/6/2005
i love it! i love it! i love it!...

ahm..y'know...this story of yours has similarities to my present sit right now...but anyway, i can relate to what's happening so please do continue... )
Kaley D. Oscope chapter 3 . 12/4/2005
I really liked it! I just love the style you used in this fic, is a bit different, but I like it better.

Something I don't get is Tomoyo leaving and Sakura not even trying to go after her, after the show I mean.

I hope you update soon, and good luck because it's december already! Just take care, byep!
jahannah12 chapter 3 . 12/3/2005
i really like you're story. it's really interesting and cute in a sense. hope u update soon, i'll be waiting
MotteSpark chapter 3 . 11/29/2005
Gosh, the ending was really thought-provoking! You know, the part where Relena explains the title of her show. I love the idea of a Tomoyo separated from Sakura (I mean, in other fics, these two ALWAYS seem to be together, don't they?)

And it's so sad to see a heartbroken Tomoyo... *sob* Your writing's so good that the events happening just seem to flow and everything seems to be so real.. it's like I can just see Tomoyo struggling to ask Eriol to let go and I can just hear her calling him, "baka".

I hope you manage to update as quickly as possible... I want to see who is sending out the wedding invitations. It's Sakura, is it? Sending an invitation to Tomoyo cause she wants her (ex) best friend to attend her wedding...
Ein Auftragskiller chapter 3 . 11/29/2005
what more can I say? you're so great! i really love it! yeay for ExT!
death by idiots chapter 3 . 11/29/2005
Hey! You have a great knack with words, but you need to work a little with your tense. Some parts you wrote it in present tense instead of past. Overall, it was really nice! Update soon! chapter 3 . 11/28/2005
since i didn't review for your other chapters and because i read them all in one sitting, i'll just review your story so far...

basically, you really know how to make readers really sympathise with Clampy's characters here. i keep wanting to scream at tomo and eriol to get on with the kissing and be happy... and please understand, i'm usually a heartless, evil, conniving son of a gun. so, your story so far pleases me immensely (though i still want to see them kiss and be all lovey-dovey).

the only thing i hate about this is that i have to wait for the next chapter... no seriously, that's all. no words misspelled, or none that jumped out at me. grammar was infallible (though sometimes questionable, or was that some other fic?). so there ain't to hate on here... damned, i grovel before the goddess... (you are female, right? here let me check your profile... ok, you are...)

what i like about this fic? the fact that you make this thing so achingly beautiful... twas truly touching. i kid you not. this thing would have me crying buckets if i weren't so masochistic (or at least that's what i want to believe. my friends tell me i'm just heartless...)

i expect to be dazzled again by your brillance. and if i'm not, you shall read of my displeasure... ah, i'm kidding! i'll moan and groan and then i might my eyes out! seriously though, i don't think you will ever disappoint in this matter. something tells that is so.

so write on, my good man!... woman... whatever! keep the good times rolling!
The Angels' Princess chapter 3 . 11/28/2005
ah! how delightful! i didn't know chapter 3 was already up. So THANK YOU!

okay, i lOVE THE chapter! too bad we didn't see the first coincidence of a meeting. i would of liked to see more of how they interacted. but i still loved it! And the fashion show! that sounded amazing!

i hate absolutely NOTHING in this chapter! it was wonderful!

i liked everything!

umm, i have no idea what i expect to see the next chapter. Though, i'm excited to what you'll come up with.

oh! so Tomoyo is finally going to let out her tears that'll be a lot! i think she has kept it inside her for a long time. But, the ending with them two in this chapter was so sweet and amazing! loved that! oh, i'm guessing they fell down some stairs?

the fashion show part was a little confusing.

i would like to see more of their feelings for each other developing. but i can so wait! i'm so excited to what'll happen! THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH! please continue when you can!
The Angels' Princess chapter 2 . 11/28/2005
wow! GREAT FANFIC! I LOVE IT! oh! so perfect!

the emotional turmoils and Tomoyo a model! YAY! she is SO perfect! she really is like a doll. i thought her hair would be longer but i'm glad Tomoyo is the model instead of Sakura all the time. oh! GREAT STORY!

i love how Tomoyo comforts Eriol. i hope he'll stay with her for another day at least. but that's probably just wishful thinking. well, i can't wait for more!

Please continue! THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH for this wonderful story! Thank YOU!
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