Reviews for Obvious
Akai Ito chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
I liked it...just a bit hard to follow the conversation because to the format...but hey it was good...magaling ka...
gabrielle angelique chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
ah...another goodie...
Vhlue Princess chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
I missed you so much! I've waited a lot to see your name once again on my computer screen. I'm happy coz you're back! As always, you've written a very nice fic. I hope thaty you'll also be able to update your other fics soon (especially Bad Habits - it's my favorite). That's all! I'll be looking forward for your updates on any of your fics.
kurah chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
I like it. I can't wait for some more stories from you o)
silverstrings chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
I've missed your writing SO much. ;_; (And this inspires me to get off my ass and work on 30_kisses themes and MD again, too. Eheh...) I like the mostly-dialogue kind of one-shots. They're nice. :D

Critique? Eh... Not much. Wonderfully in character! *_* I think a few of the non-dialogue lines were a bit repetetive, but they don't stand out much anyway.

;_; Hope to read more of your stuff too. I've missed it since you've been gone!