|Reviews for Prophecy|
| me chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
...no offence but i thought that was a bit boring...sorry
| Unknown chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Whoa! That's kind of copying the movie when Neo talks to the Oracle! She asked "do you want a cookie" again!
| Sydney Andrews chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Personally, I don't really think that Trinity would be particularly pleased with the idea that she'd fall in love with the One (I know I woudln't: it's kinda a creepy prediction). That being said, yours is a fresh idea on an overdone concept in fanfic. Props for that.
I might suggest that you expand on the idea... I'm curious what ELSE the Oracle told Trin (quote from M1: "Everything the Oracle told me has come true... everything but this...") ... it's a question that, I think, has been largely overlooked thus far.
;) Eager to see where it goes... do u plan to update?
| fatalfeline chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Okay. I spy a few problems. She said that the Oracle told her that she would fall in love with a dead man. Bit of out-of-characterness. Pretty good. Not bad.
| neos girl chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
| Daydreamer731 chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Umm...I hate to say it, but this is probably the most over-done concept in Matrix fanfiction...