Aaaaaannndd you lost me. Just too much juvenile nonsense to wade through even if the plot should turn out to exist or even be good. Sorry. Thanks for the effort.

Ok...they progressed from carelessly allowing eavesdropping to bumbling buffoons. This is how they behave in front of students?

This is the second time they've carelessly allowed themselves to be overheard in private conversations. Not building their image of seasoned warriors or of CONSTANT VIGILANCE. interesting plot, well written, thanks.

shitty quality and not at all funny

This was very well written. I am astonished by the reviews that state you started writing this at twelve years old. My only complaint is I don't see what changed or understand why they bothered going back in time.

So what year are the Marauders in?

Barf…remove this crap

This was a real fun just read this. Wondering if you ever look back at what your 13 year old self wrote. A fun story. Hope you look back with fond memories. Really enjoyed reading it.

Lycanthropy* saw the question mark and figure you weren't sure of the spelling

I love you've another please

OMG I LOVE IT. This fic is really interesting anddd hilarious.

perrrfect
your writing improved over time
drastically
woot
a 13 year old
wow

best-written chapter yet

This is trash

lycanthropy