Reviews for Putting the 'M' in Mystery |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow 13... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Type your review for this chapter here... |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh? i'm lost... might be clearer next chapter. reviews were no help understanding this chapter |
![]() ![]() Wow...that was terrible. I was definitely expecting something a lot more...substantial. The first chapter failed to engage (and the first chapter is the most important chapter of a story because it is where a reader decides if it's worth their time or not). The flow was entirely disjointed, none of the characters acted in a sensible manner and it was actually hard to get a clear image of what was even going on. Harry and Ginny also seemed to have been turned into Mary Sues. Seriously, what the hell? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wowwwww! incredibly talented... :))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() niceaction :)) wish for more slytherin integration description... :P plhulease |
![]() ![]() ![]() They can't be that obtuse, can't they? And I answer myself: Of course they could be; it's fanfiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn but that hurt. Just had to throw that last bit in there didn't you? Brilliantly written. The laughter and joy of the marauders era darkened with the melancholy tones of both past and future wars. The brightness of getting to see Harry's loved ones at there best only to know and retain the strength not to change the past no matter how much it killed him inside. This story cut much more deeply than most I've read in this genre. Most focus on the difference a change can make, this one focused on the fact that what is already written cannot truly be changed while offering the closure that was so desperately needed. Its a harsh read for people like us who read or write fanfiction because we never got the closure we needed. Who try to change the facts of a story that has already finished in order to get a happier ending. Unfortunately the sad reality is that we all don't get one, and I think that this story encapsulates that perfectly. The sad reality with the hopeful future. So thank you for the read even if I am 11 years late to the party. |
![]() ![]() Well written and thoroughly enjoyed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! I'm so excited for this! |
![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH YOU WERE ONLY 13? THAT IS SOO GOOD I ADMIRE YOU MY HERO |
![]() ![]() For a 12 year old when you started this, its pretty amazing! You're probably like 23 now, and will probably never read this, but the story is amazing! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! So good... |
![]() ![]() AHHHH BEST STORY EVER! NOW OFF TO EAT DORRITTOS |
![]() ![]() ![]() lycanthropy I believe |