yeah they would forgive you if all you were doing was avenging your sisters death but you dont you join the madman and end up getting two of your friends killed and one in azkaban for life and the other depressed. jeez harry I bet you just someone helped him change over fully to the dark before he was thinking of avenging his sister and trying to plead for his friends life but you just told him he would get them killed and that he was a traitor

lol here harry is possibly dying and ginny is just planning their life together

lol ginny might not be able to beat harry in a duel but she can in a tongue lashing competition

YOU WERE 13 WHEN YOU WROTE THIS!? my competitiveness is just clawing out right now, i cant even. I have been trying write for ages, but i cant bc im too lazy to get up off my ass and actually put an effort into something. *sigh btw im 14 and i feel like i havent accomplished anything in my life. In other news, this story was awesome and maybe one of the best ive read on this website. Hope you are a professional author right now or something bc you totally have it in you.

The humor is just a bit too juvenile for me so I'm going to stop here.

So far the "humor" is rather mediocre.
The amount of grammar mistakes is rather apalling as well.

I'd like to say it'd be better without Ginny but it'd be too early.

oh my gods. that was so awesome.

lycanthropy

I really love your story, and I've read it several times, but the only thing that is really bothering me is how short Harry's classes are. You don't have to write the whole class, but could you at least say something like 'and now on to other things...'

An excellent and well-written piece - probably the best characterization of any of the "time-travel" fanfics I've read.

Reviewing, reviewing! (Shaking in fear.) I thought it was awesome. And hilarious!

Looooooove this story!

Is ickle gin gin married to the amazing bouncing ferret?

Lovely mix! Creative, hilarious, quite the tear-jerker... I loved it!