|Reviews for Hermione's Baby|
| 4thkage chapter 16 . 10/18
sure it's a good name...
| 4thkage chapter 14 . 10/18
Melantha is Draco's mom...
did i read right?
| 4thkage chapter 12 . 10/18
ark...when u used different languages...
i started google translate it...
it's so beautiful...
| 4thkage chapter 8 . 10/18
oh my...this is so heartbreakinggggg...
| 4thkage chapter 4 . 10/17
ouch...that's hurt to read when someone u hate so much impregnate u...
but ppl change...
that's why i luv Dramione...
| savannavansmutsmut chapter 23 . 10/13
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/14
This was poorly written.
| percabethbooklion chapter 21 . 6/6
k, so i was reading the beginning of the chapter where "Hermione" finds Draco and i was too busy complaining and not reading completely the subsequent scene after the "reconcile." I had assumed that it wasnt all that important because it was a simple reconciliation in my head. I was too busy being an ignorant reader criticizing the swiftness of "Hermione" finding him. I was thinking that the scene would be better if, in fact, you had added in the exact plot twist that you already had. I had almost kept going until i read the last line in which Draco reveals that it is in fact Bellatrix. I nearly dismissed it thinking that he just had called ber beautiful as inreverence to an earlier chapter. The chapter title, i could tell litterally translated into "She is beautiful" so it didn't exactly turn me otherwise. I realized as i had mulled it all over in my head that you HAD done as I had mentally suggested.
I would like to apologize for my ignorant readig. I absolutely loved this fic. I am going to start reading the sequalas soon as it isnt so early morning that the sun isnt up (so in other words, not at 12:52 am).
| Puddin's chapter 23 . 4/28
WOW! That was an amazing story! I loved all the twists and turns, but hated the beginning when Hermione and Ron were the (disgustingly) sweet couple. I cannot stand to see Hermione with anyone but Draco... Anyway, loved the story! XO ~Draco's Girl (C)
| Puddin's chapter 4 . 4/27
OK, it's a *little*late, but last chapter, you had Ron saying his parents were dead & all the sudden, they're not. Last chapter you wrote Ron convincing Hermione that she should tell her parents that she's preggers. (Note: this is from memory, my computer wouldn't let me pull it back up, but I just finished reading it and then saw in here that Ron and Hermione were talking to Ron's parents. Had to comment to set it straight.)
Hermione: "What about your parents?"
Ron: "I thought we agreed not-"
Hermione: "I meant how are they?"
Ron: "That's what I came to tell you. They're dead."
| luvtracker chapter 14 . 2/29
Another horribly written story. Why don't you do us all a favor and delete this garbage?
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/5/2015
ERMAGERD! MALENTHA IS DRACO'S MOTHER! lol WWWOOOOOOOOWWWWW! Love it! Great secret... Is this your only fanfiction? I WANT MORE YUAAA
| Lilykate chapter 13 . 7/5/2015
I love your story! It is the longest fanfiction I have ever read. But it is sooooo tempting to keep reading! It's a wonderful story. I'm 11 and even I love it!
| faigi.turner chapter 23 . 5/19/2015
can you write a sequel to this? i really didn't get the ending. otherwise it was great story
| Hermione Malfoy chapter 9 . 5/11/2015
U are one of the best and yo're not stupid