Reviews for Swept Off Her Feet
RicknLisafan chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
I really like this story, but it doesn't seem like it's finished. I hope you plan on writing another chapter. I'm a huge Rick and Lisa fan and I just love the romance between them. Please write another chapter and make it really romantic and let's get Minmei out of the picture pretty quick, okay?
mclaughlin chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
That was very well told.

You give a good explanation as to why Edwards has or had so much anamosity/hatred towards both Lisa and rick in the sentinal's books.

Good work.
Bonnie Charlie chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
very good, lad. i noticed that sometimes you'd mess up on your puncuation, or you would leave off bits and peices. all in all, and truth be told, i think that's what makes a great writer. i do it too. by the way, you have plenty of room for a sequel. work on that! i'll be waiting.
Adena McGee chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Good work! I like your descriptions & how you developed everything. It was just a tiny bit confusing on the parts where we went back & forth between Edwards & Lisa. I would just use some sort of divider.

Good job overall. Keep it up!