|Reviews for The Unforgetful Birthday|
| Mango517 chapter 13 . 7/15/2008
Okay I totally have mixed feeling about this story. Some parts are really good like some, sarcastic House comments, then there are some really bad things. Like how the first 7 chapters are in bold and with no real structure. You don't really get whom is speaking to whom etc, etc. Also a lot of stuff is out of character. Horribly out of character. And yet some part are really good and in character. Never less it was an interesting story, but I think you should rewrite the first couple of chapter. Or at least make new paragraph when someone new speaks and change the bold writing. Just a idea. Also something that bugs me. Cameron tells House she is 30, and then that she have worked for him for 6 years. That would mean she graduated from both college and Med school when she was like 24...normally you be at least 26, and you usually have like 18 months of internship after that...and then some time to choose a specialty...
| Rosi92 chapter 12 . 6/22/2006
Please update soon! I like this story a lot.
| pooky13 chapter 13 . 12/25/2005
I want to read the rest of mErry Christmas House... u r a good writer... u sucked me in with it... I didnt want to stop reading...
| pooky13 chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
Good! Wonderful! LOved IT! Sad but good! great!
| BookwormKiwi chapter 13 . 9/12/2005
Hey, really good plot, but...it ended quite well, but maybe next time, try not to end with 'I woke up from the dream' kind of thing. It worked quite well here, but I was a bit disappointed with the ending.
I'm almost sure you acted on some advice from a review telling you to separate your "" lines. It definitely got better near the end.
| MC chapter 13 . 9/7/2005
I can't believe that didn't really happen! Great Story. I think I like it a little better this way. Can't wait to read you're next fic.
| eternalgorithm chapter 13 . 9/7/2005
loved it :)... hope it all comes true :)
| thisaccounthasbeendeactivated chapter 13 . 9/6/2005
Well done! But I'm kinda sad it had to end...
| stairwaytotheskies chapter 13 . 9/6/2005
Very nice twist! At least House didn't really get amnesia! (I don't think I spelled that right... :/)
I'm looking forward to your next story!
And this is going on my favorites!
| jeevesandwooster chapter 13 . 9/6/2005
oh wow! that was totally cute..and sweet. great job, i actually wasn't expecting the "it was all a dream" thing, and I usually catch on to those. Great job! *smiles again, remembering fluffy cuteness*
| jessssss chapter 12 . 9/4/2005
WOW i like it, please continuee
| thisaccounthasbeendeactivated chapter 12 . 9/4/2005
Um... this was kinda, well, I dunno... quick... I just don't think it's up to your usual standards, you know?
| jeevesandwooster chapter 12 . 9/4/2005
ugh. i finally get a new computer and get to read what i've missed...and it ends in a cliffhanger.
in the words of the immortal daffy duck
| Jenna chapter 10 . 9/3/2005
'Disturb his life with that telephone girl from Australia? No." House took another bite of soup. "They would be on the phone all night talking in their native language about 'Vegamite'
Lol ok it's Vegemite by the way... and it's yum
Good so far
| stairwaytotheskies chapter 12 . 9/2/2005
That was a little short...
I hate it when there's cliffhangers! I hope the last chapter's really long and that you go out with a bang! :)