|Reviews for Diminished Light: Void's Assault|
| matt.bannon.31 chapter 31 . 10/25/2012
Awesome story! It really kept it's tone very well, a dark, and sometimes downright mean-spirited one, that managed to not be TOO depressing through use of good humor spread throughout, as needed! Can't wait to read the next story!
| brycel chapter 21 . 7/25/2010
From the moment Ami showed her crybaby attitude i knew Miyako and Ami would start fighting.I loved the high heel murderess joke poor Michael being picked on.
| brycel chapter 18 . 7/24/2010
man i lost count at who all has a stone and how many are left
| brycel chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
good beginning let's see if it stay's that way
| Zeromaru Chaos Mode chapter 31 . 12/8/2008
series? FUCKING WIN! Oh hell yes i knew there was SOMETHING wrong when i saw such an abrupt end.
by the way...Shina sounds a LOT like one Alma Wade from F.E.A.R.
S'alright though. Alma's win and awesome, even if she does go around killing practically anything that had to do with her father's company.
i mean...she DOES want to protect her son...
I'd totally date Shina though. something about dark angry massively powerful girls just attracts me.
| Zeromaru Chaos Mode chapter 8 . 12/8/2008
good GOD finally someone threw in her light. This chapter was friggin great, brings back memories of the show.
the jokes are spot on.
| Zeromaru Chaos Mode chapter 6 . 12/8/2008
i gotta admit, i do like the subtle jokes they're making. feels like i'm reading an adult version of the show.
| Zeromaru Chaos Mode chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
oh crap-nuggets i was hoping she'd blast the prick back to the stone-age.
they never DID fully flesh out Hikari's powers. At first it seemed like it was all the crest but...
either way, this caught my interest. lets see where this rabbit hole leads...
| TheGreatAnimeFan chapter 31 . 11/2/2008
A nice story. I'm saving it. It's great to find long stories like this.
| The Two-One-Five chapter 31 . 10/9/2007
finished this story along time ago, felt that i should review it. this story is definitely worth every word. You changed all of the characters from their selfish adult hood to a reminiscing of their child hood days. I'm sure that the sequel will be just as good if not better with your talent
| RagingDragon04 chapter 31 . 8/17/2007
...Let me describe my reactions throughout the story...
0_0: Im... Speechless...
T_T: For do love of god! Why god why!
_: Yay, Romantic scene with almost everyone... and almost all chars have girlfriend or boyfriend.
-_-': How can guys and girls fight all the time like that.
0.0: Oh my god! They are all ultra deppresed! and Hikari cuts herself!(faints)
This was by far the most entertaining stories I have ever read... you should work as a writer... this was really entertaining.
The level of Drama and Suspense was susprisingly good... better than anything I have ever read before...
The darkness this story contains is awesome, Hikari with a suicidal boyfriend... and almost all Digi destined loose their memories.
There's just one thing that had me in doubt...
Hikari was going out on collage... but she was dating Davis... then she moved in with the fag that tried to kill her... It really confuses me... if you can take some time to explain to me... I would really appreciate it.
I rank your story with a 9... dont get me wrong its a great story... but it missed a bit of fighitng.
If there is a sequal then I'll try to help you out with as much knowledge as I can give you.
If you can I would like you to reply... please... thanks for your time.
I dont care if you are a girl or a guy... to me you rock!
The only thing you should really work on is... well... I saw no big flaws... except some grammar mistakes... not big ones... also try working a bit more on how you describe whats happening.
I'll give you a lot of credit for separating the team and writing about each of them in each chapter... it must have been a little hard... If I was rich or had tons of money I would freaking give it to you so you can sell your work.
Anyways take care and I'll be waiting for a reply from you... if you can of course...
Your friend and newest fan
RagingDragon04, peace dude. _
| bobbyneko chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
ne im just reviewing again to make sure i added you to my updates list -_-
anyways luv ya story
| bobbyneko chapter 31 . 1/14/2007
sweet im glad youre continueing. this has to be like the best fanfic on here. great job!
| Digimon Forever chapter 31 . 1/5/2007
Excellent written story. I really enjoyed it, and it's the first kind of storyline I've encountered. I think it's original. Good job on finishing it.
Have you ever thought of maybe actually turning it into a book, as in publish it? Just asking.
- Prince of Myths
| Birdboy chapter 31 . 1/3/2007
One of those fics that makes it seem like digimon never ended. I'll be reading the sequel.