your story writing is good. good but not ruined. just ruined it for me personally when you did the child turning didn't make it. it just made it not be good to me anymore. hard to explain but I skipped through a lot trying to read it but didn't work. but you're good at writing stories

this is low-key my first time reading a fanfic on fan lol

You're a disgusting fucktard who should have been drowned at birth by your whore momma's pimp.

beautifully done

Merci pour votre histoire

Loved it!

hello. i am the anonymous olfactory system, anonynose. thank you for the nice story. i don't usually take the time to write comments, but here i am. unknown sniffer out.

Well that was a very enjoyable Drarry and de-aged storyline. I wasn't expecting the de-aged part at all.
I liked the way the story was going and all the twists and turns throughout.
The battles were intense and the love that Harry and Draco had for one another was touching.
I'm so going to recommend this storyline to all of my friends and family.
Thanks so much.
Take care and be well!

Wow, what a powerful emotional spell.
Poor hurt Harry, I can only hope with time he will heal.
Onwards I read.
Take care and be well

Hi, I started reading this story with no idea as to how serious it was. The description said nothing about it being about sexual abuse. Or that it was a big part of the story. I know there was a warning at the beginning of the second chapter, however I feel the need to point out that, when you write about something so explicitly you need to put a bigger trigger warning. As someone who has been sexually abused myself, when I read the warning and you saying you didn't go into too much detail, I figured it was something mild and not something that would be a big part of the plot, nor something that would be described so detailed and heartwrenching. So if I may suggest, you put a more serious trigger warning and not just at the chapter, but the shory itself about the story containing sexual abuse and rape along with physical and emotional abuse that I think would save some people who are triggered by such things from actually being triggered as they can then decide that it's something they shouldn't read. I like your writing. You're clearly a very good writer. But I find myself in tears, sobbing and having flashbacks.. I kind of wish I had known what the story would be about, because if I had, I most certainly wouldn't have started reading it, because I would have known it would be triggering. I know that is not your intention with this story, so that is why I'm writing this comment, so that hopefully you'll put Sexual abuse, trauma and Rape trigger warnings clearly in the beginning of the story, so others don't end up shocked and having a breakdown because of something unexpected and triggering. I will continue to read the story, because now that I did actually read the part with the sexual abuse and rape, I need to read the rest and find out what happens to Harry. I need to read his recovery and healing. And once I've started on a good, and well written story, I can't stop. Hopefully this story will contain healing and recovering. And hopefully it will be a small step for me to also recover and heal from my own trauma

Love Draco calling him baby

Fv

I always come back to this fic! I love it! Please keep writing about them like this!

Yay! Found it! I couldn't remember the title and I have searched high and low for this story. Once more into the breach as I do e back in to this wonderful piece of work...

Reread this again for like the third time! Still love it!