Reviews for Jet's Fears
Moka Raiden chapter 8 . 4/16/2009
Wow! please contiue :O pelase!
pepperdadog chapter 8 . 4/29/2007
I'm sorry, but this is not horror. I think you should change if from horror to romance. The overall story was good though.

pepperdadog chapter 5 . 4/29/2007
*sigh* funny, very funny. but my spine is still not shaking.

pepperdadog chapter 4 . 4/29/2007
So... If this is a T rated fic, and its horror, why is my skin not pricking? Hoping it gets better.

Eternal Fire Goddess chapter 8 . 10/24/2005
Oh my god! *Jaw drops to hit ground.

Otto: I'm gonna be a dad?

Sparx: Ha ha! You have responsibilities! I don't!

Otto: What happens if Nova gets pregnant later on?

Sparx: Easy! *Puts on sombrearo* I ran away to Mexico!

Me: Er Sparx, she's right behind you.

Sparx: *Sweat drops* Oh cr...*Gets hit by Nova*

Me: Ouch, thats gotta hurt. Well, bye!
Blossom268703 chapter 8 . 5/22/2005
Great surprise ending.
Skeleton King-girl chapter 8 . 5/20/2005
Awsome story! Nice ending too. ;) Jet is friends with Ivy. Didn't see that coming. And, I can't beleve that Jet is pregnant. WHOA! I wander what the story will be like. I'm gonna check it right now. That is... after I beat up old bone bag here! *grins evily at Skeleton King*

SK:*playing MY PS2. turns to me fearfully* what?

Me:*whispers in his ear* This is the part, when you runaway!

SK:*sigh* here we go agen... *starts running*

Me:*chase's him with a flare gun, blowing fire out* EH-HEHEHEHEHHEHEHEE! This is fun! I'm e-vil!

~c-ya! .
SparxGirl chapter 8 . 5/20/2005
(jaw hits the floor) Jet's pregnant! erm, congrats?

Sprx: no, it goes more like this (in high voice) OH YOUR PREGNANT! CONGRATULATIONS! YOUR GOING TO BE A MUM! (normal) see?

Me: err...yeah...hey, that means Otto going to be a dad!

Sprx: never! (slaps forehead)

me: and hey, Ivy and Jet got along! i don't have to tell them to stop fighting anymore! -

Update soon! -
Lmann chapter 8 . 5/20/2005
Oh... my... lord...

4Evermonkeyfan chapter 8 . 5/19/2005
Awsome story! Otto's going to be a father? LOL! This should be intresting! Please put Olivia in one of your stories? She has power over the earth and is green with light green eyes and green curly hair! Write more soon!
guy who reads too much fantasy chapter 8 . 5/19/2005
Spectacular chapter! The next story is bound to be great as well.

Frus: Congratulatons Jet!
Beastfire chapter 8 . 5/19/2005
Nice! Jet's gonna be a mom! And she and Ivy actually got along for once!

Ivy: Yeah. Beatin' the crap outta both Sparky and Bloodstone. I hope ol' Bloody Boy's gonna come back so I can do it again.

Beastfire: Maybe in my next story. Write more soon!
The One To Rule Them All chapter 8 . 5/19/2005
Me: Congratulations Jet!

Krystal: Aw! You have all my luck on that one my friend!

Me: 'My firend'? Wow aren't we acting posh!

Krystal: (smiling) Sorry! Native language kicking in there!

me: (raising eyebrow) Your planet has their own language?

krystal: yeah! I shall tell you some! Ahem...Kiko alma cacaueto

Me: sounded spanishe to me!

Krystal: Similar, I said- "I am surrounded by idiots"

Me: HEY! Thanks for a great read Caitlyn, now if you'll excuse my i'm off to kill a littly 'cacaueto' myself! (runs after Krystal)

Krystal: AH!
Skeleton King-girl chapter 7 . 5/19/2005
It just keeps getting better and better,and better,and-

SK:Now don't start that agen!



Me:Anyway, great job. Love it! Just love it!

*thumbs up* :) Don't you agreen? huh?

SK:yah... whatever..

Me:'K. bye-bye! Say good bye Skeleton King.

SK:good bye Skeleton King-*blows up in smoke*

Me:hahahahahahaha! I'm so evil!

~c-ya! :)
guy who reads too much fantasy chapter 7 . 5/18/2005
Nice. I did greatly enjoy this chapter, and I llok forward to the next one.
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