Reviews for Road Not Taken
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 6 . 10/25/2011
I am against death penalty on principle. Even though there are things worse than death. I'm against death, lethal injection, using prisoners as guinea pigs for scientific experiments, torturing prisoners under guise of curing them from psychological disorder...

~ only to let Kira loose again?

Don't you remember? He isn't Kira anymore; he is Raito.

Good luck, L, Light, Watari, Souichirou, Near, Mello, Matt, Sayu, Matsuda, and other members of the taskforce.
DecepticonDefenestrater chapter 6 . 3/13/2011
good story
icywarm chapter 6 . 1/26/2011
This is awsome. Would you please update. I would enjoy more of this story.
MeShelly chapter 2 . 8/30/2008
This was a neat little look into what might have been. I liked how you emphasized that it was more than remembering the plans he had made; he also absorbed the Self that had developed when he had begun using the Death Note.

The kiss was indeed unexpected, and I like that Light was able to reveal himself in a somewhat-humorous moment. I also liked how L's comment, "I didn't know I was that bad" could be taken as a literal complaint, or an actual teasing of his friend.

kawa-kiree chapter 6 . 2/25/2008
Omfg, this story is awesome! My friend sent it to me and I'm SO glad she did. I wish you'd continue it though! Please? :(
Pen-Name-Kitsune-chan chapter 6 . 10/26/2007
awesome story!

can't wait to read more! update soon!
phoenix of hell chapter 6 . 9/30/2007
This is very interesting. I'm curious about what Souichirou will do next, and how the relationship between Raito and L will evolve. Are you going to continue it?
Itallia chapter 6 . 4/9/2007
I like this chapter, esp. how you show that Souichirou followed L's percentages in his thoughts and actions.
Itallia chapter 5 . 4/9/2007
Haha, smart. I like the percentage stuff in the end, though you might want to edit the actual word "percent" in because the sign doesn't show up.
Itallia chapter 4 . 4/9/2007
I am under the impression that L does not want to execute Raito, and is somehow planning to help him escape/win the trial. Maybe the news about Kira being executed was fake?
Itallia chapter 3 . 4/9/2007
Interesting way to introduce L to Ryuuku.
Itallia chapter 2 . 4/9/2007
I like the way you made Raito suppress Kira, and the way you present them as two separate entities.
TimeTravelFreak chapter 6 . 3/3/2007

I really enjoyed reading your Fic and am looking forward to the next update!

Will Raito's father find him?

What has the former Kira been doing with L?

Is Misa going to show up too?

I think that your idea of L helping Raito is wonderful but enough said.

I hope you update soon,


oddstick chapter 6 . 1/8/2007
Wow, really interesting take on an alternate outcome. I can't wait for more!
maniackiller12 chapter 6 . 1/4/2007



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