Reviews for Pain Redefined
Fairy Princess Yuugi chapter 3 . 4/29/2015
love your story hope u update soon
yu-gi-ohlove3 chapter 3 . 1/15/2015
you so should continue this story it's really good I want to read more :)
Toxiclilly chapter 3 . 10/20/2014
I'm really enjoying this story and I would love for you to continue it! :)
DeactivatedNoLongerHere chapter 3 . 3/14/2014
Awww... Yugi is soooo cuuuuute! I read Abandoned Every Mile and these 3 chapters and I already want to kill whoever is stalking Yugi (If he wants to hurt Yugi.). Or we could throw him in the Shadow realm...or Azkaban...or the Underworld...or Tartarus 0_o I didn't knoe I knew that many horrible places...
Enough of my rambling. Good story! Keep on writing!
Tsundere Jiuweihu Kitsune chapter 2 . 12/21/2013
YuugiYY chapter 3 . 12/4/2012
I know you said its on hold, but please do more!
Sairey13 chapter 3 . 11/12/2011
What happens next? Does that stranger kidnaps Yugi? Please, I want to know!
Fangirl4ver chapter 3 . 9/23/2011
HEY WHAT THE FUDGE! That's it? No way what happen, update! It cant be that bad! Anyway you did a great job and I was upset when they lose their money and stuff, GREAT idea with the man and the camera:) love it:) okay come on and update-forever keep writing;)
andysanime chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
Really good job!
hollowgirl15 chapter 3 . 3/3/2011
I like it! I like how the chapters are longer too. Are you gonna finish this story? Pweeze? Wif ice cream and cherries and sprinkles on top? _
The Homunculi Twins chapter 3 . 1/18/2011
Me: okay mr. mystery man! **takes out bazooka gun** NO ONE messes with Lil' Yugi! **fires at mr. mystery man)

Mr. MM: Oh crap...**runs**


Yami: oh crap! how the hell did she get her bazooka?

Envy: she picked the lock...

Yami: shit...anywhoo! good story!

Me: DIE~! **laughing like a maniac while shooting at Mr. MM**

Envy: **sweatdrop** she had sugar...didnt she?

Yami: **sigh** yeah...**holds up bags of Dove chocolate, mini Hersey's, and mini recesses (which i dont own)** she also had a hot coco...

Envy: **sweatdrop**

Yami: **sigh** where doomed...along with Mr. MM...


Envy: ...oh dear...i just noticed, but u havent updated this story in 5 YEARS!

Everyone: what?

Envy: see? it says Updated: 05-18-05 in fact, its almost been 6 years...

Me: NO! **goes into emo corner hugging Bazooka**

Mr. MM: phew...

Me: i need to get rid of my anger! **cocks bazooka** DIE! **chases after Mr. MM**

Mr. MM: NO! **runs**

Yami: ...ok then...hope u update soon!

Envy: buh-bye! chapter 3 . 12/14/2010
This is great i hope you'll work on it some more..-
NaotoShiroganeFangirl1990 chapter 3 . 10/7/2010
I love this sequel to Abandoned Every Mile. I hope you write some more soon.
loveXtoXwrite chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
You should write more on this story... please. :(
Guest chapter 3 . 4/14/2010
:( what happened? write more! pleasse!
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