|Reviews for The Break of Dawn|
| teamedward1976 chapter 1 . 2/20
Love this continuation of "One Touch Of Nature"!
| Gemma chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
A very sensual passage. It is nice to read some text about sensuality in pregnant women. In fact I read that making love while being pregnant is good for relaxing. I enjoyed reading it. A good depiction of our beloved passionate couple.
| Liz86000 chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Great GREAT GREEAT fic! Sully & Michaela are so sweet... And I could totally see Sully so excited about the baby that he couldn't sleep, & Michaela feeling much more free, not having to think about if this time she was gonna be pregnant.
Really great fic!
| Maritza chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
Hey! Didn't anyone else read this? This was great if you don't mind a little R-rated moment between a very loving and sensual, passionate couple. I also liked the little teasing of Micheala. It was rare to see the character on the show to show some fun side and for Sully as well. Perhaps you can write a story around them being playful.