Reviews for Return of the Lost |
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Clearmens chapter 14 . 11/27/2015 What of the Ascension of the Uzumaki or the Birth of the Shadow Lord? |
Itachi Nara chapter 14 . 2/15/2015 Hello writer, I know you have not seen my name before. I came to say this is one of my favourite fics ever. The way you tell story is amazing with mixing romance action and humor. you are a fantastic writer and have fantastic fics. I will miss this one when its over PS:I am now your internet stalker, get used to seeing my name ;) |
Zachary terrell chapter 5 . 12/12/2014 HEY not a flame just a correction I would have thought you would have fixed by now. It is IRUKA not IKURA. Again just a heads up. |
jacalman chapter 14 . 5/30/2012 please don't stop the story ;-; it's really good |
origamishishou chapter 7 . 6/26/2011 Sorry to be so picky but i'm this [] close to being a weeaboo. The hand signs you came up with made me laugh cos i read bull and monkey without a comma. also just to let you know there are twelve hand signs each one corresponding to an animal of the chinese zodiac. i can assure you taht there are neither a fox nor a cat their (unless you count kyo from fruits basket). aside from that this story is reaking awesome. Also the sword that naruto used against rekku? was that based off of anything? if ever you read this know and rememeber that there's a whole bunch of people out there who love this story and all that you write. keep up the great work. |
LunarCatNinja chapter 14 . 6/29/2010 LOVE the story, and I hope to read more of your stories! W |
krazyfelinelover chapter 14 . 5/24/2009 Hi, I started reading your series last night and have enjoyed it so far, I plan on starting to read the fourth part sometime tomorrow if I have time. Anyway, thank you for writing a story with an actual plot and not abandoning the story. |
vixenrory chapter 2 . 5/11/2009 really gud! lol... |
Vallavarayan chapter 8 . 4/6/2009 (1) Concept Borrowed from Robert Jordans wheel of time series, Modeled after the darkhounds.- a lotta things are from Wheel of time- right from the aiel chiefs right of passage thingamagick that shows anyone who enters his or her past present and future :-p to a lotta other things. i was kinda expecting naruto to wield a spear after reading all the WOT influence actually. |
Rowie94 chapter 3 . 10/18/2008 chidori! chidori chidOri CHIDORI! NOT CHIDIRI! CHIDORI |
JayCheng chapter 14 . 7/1/2008 DAMN THIS IS GOOD |
kyuubiNaru1990 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008 great story! |
shareece chapter 14 . 3/31/2008 nice story |
Quackpotty chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 I'm sorry if you didn't want the c2 staff invite. I don't think that you know me or anything because I haven't as yet reviewed your stories. This series was amongst the first I read when I came over to FFnet and helped shape me into the NaruHina fanatic I am today. At first I didn't know about anon reviews so I'm sorry I didn't review. I sent the c2 invite because you have three of the best completed NaruHina fics I've read (I don't know if you're going to finish the book 4, and I am yet to get to reading any of your other fics.) I set the c2 up yesterday in anticipation of finishing my fic and encouraging other authors to do the same. If you don't want the invite, feel free to reject it. I hope though that you will accept it. I've already got a few excellent authors/betas that have accepted the invites I sent. Oh well, as far as this fic and te others in your series, I loved them. I even wrote it on my profile when I set it up as a list of my ten fav fics/series'. Thanks for the awesome series! NJOY! |
Nei chapter 11 . 10/1/2007 wow that was really good. better then most fight scenes i've read. (u could work on ur more..R-rated scenes more though, lol being graphic is the key(from a few chapters back)) |