Reviews for Traitor
Sarralyn Numairsra chapter 1 . 10/14/2006


Boy, am I ever glad that didn't happen.

I like your writing style. I suppose it's a bit like Hemingway's, in that it's short, but yours uses much nicer words than his.
Sir Gawain of Camelot chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
O_O Ek! But- but- She wouldn't! But then again, that is the point of a what-if, isn't it? I'm wondering what Roger had that he could offer her... He'd have to do quite a lo of convincing.
Alianna-Kypiroth chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
good story
credenzamartini chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Great. I hadn't considered this angle before. Makes for interesting consequences, doesn't it? One critiscism- 'just', not 'juat'.
Sandwitch II chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
you have an amazing talent this is beautiful!
Wanderer of Dreams chapter 2 . 12/7/2005
::Gasp:: ::Cry:: That was so sad! Extremely well written, but o so sad. ::Sniffle:: And I love how you put the ending as a finish. Undying praise from me to you. If you'll excuse me I'll just go to my room and cry myself to death.
stargazer3 chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
omg! that was so sad! well written but sad.
Doodle033 chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Wow, that actually made me tear. No seriously. that was moving. Thank You
FanFictionFantom chapter 2 . 10/12/2005
you're welcome, is this a oneshot or are u writing more chapters?
On top of cloud 9 chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
thats sad...why wouldnt she just run away? she promised him...
Lady Knight 1512 chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
That was so sad! How could you do that? *sigh* Yes, it was sad, but it was also incredibly well-written. I could feel their pain. But she STILL broke her promise! Argh! I've never hated Alanna before...

FanFictionFantom chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
that is so sad! but good!
Skysong chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
No! Don't die Jon! This is really good. I like it a lot!
Lela-of-Bast chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
That was... morbid. But I liked it. It had an eeire sort of sadness to it. It could make a good longer story.
Keeran Amytha chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
i like it alot!
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