Reviews for Harry Potter & The New Life
Fiction In My World chapter 1 . 3/24
Plz continue it its excellent !
I've some attempts of its continuation but none of them are as good as yours so please continue it.
TheAnimeFan24 chapter 8 . 3/16
Can I ask something? I keep seeing references to the "Sorcerer's Stone" everywhere. I am British and here it's called the "Philosopher's Stone". So is it called the Sorcerer's Stone elsewhere?
maddie24clover chapter 12 . 1/27
I don't want Harry to be with either of them, just giving my opinion. Really like the story so far, I hope he faces a bad guy soon. (in front of an adult so he would have to explain his powers and such)
continental-line chapter 9 . 1/22
I like Padme, then Yuna (or whatever) might do. (I'm not too fond of Harry/OCs because the majority of them read like Mary Sus. Don't like slash either.)
continental-line chapter 7 . 1/21
"James! We must do all that we can to unite the Black and Potter family! There are too many possible interruptions around him at Godric's Hollow! We need to smuggle an Agent at Hogwarts to watch your son! Harry and Yuna must get together to unite the family's!" Sirius demanded.

Are you sure this is not Ranma 1/2? This spounds something like what Mr. Tendo and Genma would say about getting Ranma and Akane married to unite the Ryu (schools).
continental-line chapter 5 . 1/21
"and their will be some huge suspicion going on." I hate to be a grammar police but you're messing up with their/there/they're.
continental-line chapter 4 . 1/21
Right now the only pairs that I see as viable are Miss. Black (Who has a crush on Harry.) or Hermione. But this is early in the storyand alot can happen.

"A pretty girl named Blaise Zabini" I thought Blaise Zabini was a male in the book? Unless this ia part of the change in demintions.

BTW: I have noticed an increse in spelling and gramer. If you are using a spell-checker; read after using it. For example ("left with Hermione in toe." Should be "left with Hermione in tow."). Spell-checkers only check for spelling not if you are using the right word. It can give you grief over words like which/witch, to/too/two, toe/tow, etc..
continental-line chapter 3 . 1/21
I like both Ginny and Hermione, but not when a story cuts down one to build the other up. If Ginny is with Harry then poor Hermione should NOT be paired with Ron Weasel (He just wants to be fat, dumb, and lazy and the girl he marries would be just line Molly; a house-witch who cooks and pumps out babies.); Snape or Draco Malfoy (I was surprised at how many of this pairings exists. Both Snape and Draco would have to be so Out-of-Character, ignoring everything writen about them in canon, that they are new characters with old names. I have read and liked stories where both married Harry at the same time when Harry had two Head-of-House titles; thus two wives, one for eack Line (A FanFic plot device, I know.) Likewise I have read stories where Ginny is a slut, not fun. There are few stories that respect both girls, surprizingly oner of the best story's pairing was with Daphine Greengrass. I like this story so far and put on my Fav's list.
DEBob19 chapter 5 . 1/2
What the hell? Did I just miss it, or did we not learn how Hermione was involved in the major loss of house points?
Renage chapter 12 . 12/27/2013
Hey you know I want to punch you rite now?
Bloody annoying you better update soon
I have read your story a few time and its still nice keep it up
Mari Wollsch chapter 12 . 12/15/2013
great story, to bad you didn't finish xxxxxxxxxx
Guest chapter 12 . 11/18/2013
yeah, i prefer yunaxharry pair.
bibliophile chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
HarryxYuna!
Oh and love the story
LilMissCandy chapter 12 . 11/7/2013
Not still updating? It's a jolly shame. I liked what you were doing with this story.
The only thing that annoys me is your grammar and sentence structure, but I suppose commenting on something like that is a little awful of me, really. I have no idea of the circumstances surrounding your updating. Sorry.
As a certified member of the grammar police, however, I'd love to be your beta if you ever want to update this story.
Heck, I'd beta all your chapters right now if you'd approve. It's a great story, but I feel it would be a lot more effective without all the errors. They're quite detracting from the overall story.
Good job on a whole, however.
theonlychantay chapter 12 . 11/3/2013
I loooooove this! Great idea and good character development:) hope to see an update soon
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