|Reviews for Ambush!|
| rapunzl chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
What a memorable story. I remember reading this the first time around (before I had a account), and it has stuck with me since then. You have the fire between Marguerite and Roxton down perfectly, especially the way that they can alternately care and erupt at each within a moment's notice.
Such a great story. Definitely one of my favorites!
| roxtons girl chapter 1 . 9/25/2001
Great story, would have liked to have read the interation between M and R at the end [ iam a sucker for romance ] or was it for are inmagination only anyway good story.x
| Mary Whimsey chapter 1 . 9/4/2001
I'm glad you took the position that M was just trying to keep R alive when she landed him in the arena. I thought she played the scene in the cell brilliantly, just enough worry in her voice with out sounding sappy. If his ego hadn't been so involved he would have seen it. In my personal in no way offical version of M's past she learned very early for very good reasons how to take care of herself by play acting. To survive in M's world a girl needs to use all of her assets. I like how you bring in known characters and refer to past events. I love the back and forth between them. I can heard them doing your words. Great action.
| JesseAngel1 chapter 1 . 8/26/2001
| Sherri chapter 1 . 7/26/2001
Great story. I can't wait til I read your third one. You captured both M & R. I was suprised when Roxton lashed out at Marguerite but I guess when your frustrated (he can't love his Marguerite the way he wants to)you tend to hurt the one you love. Keep the stories coming.
| maggie chapter 1 . 4/22/2001
it was o.k. what else can i say i like it better when they are together
| Starlight chapter 1 . 4/11/2001
This was great. Your story was clever and well written. I liked how you brought Assai and her husband into the story. It's nice to see different characters. Keep the stories coming. I can't wait for the next one! *Starlight
| lex chapter 1 . 4/6/2001
Oh, Cal Gal, I loved this story, as you already know from my earlier emails! But I like to leave an official statement of approval, so to speak. Your portrayal of Our Girl gets better and more profound with each story you write! Really palpable tension and excitement ... great job! Love - your Lex
| CAPike chapter 1 . 4/3/2001
Read it four times...you brought the characters to life and made us hanker for more. Wish this was the episode they did last weekend instead of the dreaded "Tourist Season"...Please write again!...Thanks.
| QueenB chapter 1 . 3/30/2001
I totallllly want a sequal. awesome!
| mandy chapter 1 . 3/30/2001
You have to write more! I loved this...The story was wonderful:)
| antea chapter 1 . 3/29/2001
Like you might already know, I LOVE it! It's great! (I found a few mispellings, but besides that, everything was perfect.) I thought Marguerite and Roxton's arguments were perfect. And Marguerite seducing Dirkon- EXACTLY what she would do. You are SO great. You have to write a million more fics! :) :) :) love, me
| Bethy chapter 1 . 3/29/2001
Man, now that's talent! It was so easy to follow and left me on the edge of my seat! The only problem is that there's no sequel! C'mon, write more!
| Steffi chapter 1 . 3/29/2001
Great story !Please write more. :-)
| rachel chapter 1 . 3/28/2001
that was really good keep writing!