Reviews for Great Expectations
My Deliah chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Aw, this is awesome! I wish I had the talent to write things like this in english.. wow..
darklace15 chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Excellent dialogue, and really well written. :D
dgddsgg chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Kotetsu-san and Izumo-san were so kawaii as kids~! -
aditou chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Really well-written! I enjoyed this.
Drelfinya chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
... I...

You know, this is THE reason why Kotetsu and Izumo are together. Best friends, lovers, whatever they are, they're THERE. They're each other's touchstone, they're something the other lacks. A faith that one can choose. Belief in HIM. It's just... Just...

Philosophical, and yet, at the same time, it's just a snapshot in time.

You managed to capture them both so well, their insecurities, their youth, the heavy weight of parental and familial expectations, the emptiniess of nothing at all. It's just so. So. Good. I love it. I just love this fic, this little snapshot of the two of them, meeting for the first time, and they'll always be together, no matter what. It is just that powerful.
MidnightWhisper7 chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
I love stories about minor characters, and these guys interest me. The contrasts are interesting, Izumo with his father's pressure and seriousness, Kotetsu who has no parents, no one demanding anything of him, yet he knows what he wants. They're both kids with cynical eyes.

The last line is especially great (the start of a beautiful friendship).
shiruru chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
I really liked this piece, the theme really struck me, and I think this area was really amazing: Kotetsu can’t quite meet that gaze. No one’s ever looked at him like this, either, as if he has all the answers, as if half a dozen words from his mouth can break or save the other boy. The last three paragraphs are just beautiful, especially the final line. Nice job.
yllom21 chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Interesting and nicely done. I wonder why some people become ninja. Its a deadly career choice.
Yami'sPrincess4 chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
I liked this! I got to learn a little bit more about these two, and loved the way you told it.

Great story! *adds to faves*
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
I thought this was great. There's not too much fanfiction on Izumo and Kotetsu, so it's nice to see someone's perspective on how they became friends. I love how you take the less well-known characters from Naruto and give them these full, animated lives. It really is amazing.
Sketch 'itch chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
this story about them is so touching *weeps* hope you make more about them
anonymous person chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Aw! I liked this one.
Azamiko chapter 1 . 10/25/2005
I've read this one before...dunno why I didn't review...anyway, it's fun...I like the charaterization...
Renn chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
aw! that's so sweet!
Spectre chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Mr, kids are cute, but I like the serious tone.
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