|Reviews for It ain't the plan|
| NamarieGreenleaf chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
you gotta keep writing! do they survive and get out? will they go crazy? gah! update!
| KariHermione chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
do they make it out?
| Kittygurl212 chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
That was pretty good. I love reavers.
| Spot991 chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
There were grammatical errors in the sentence where you warned the reader that there might be grammatical errors. I don't normally think of beta readers as being essential, but if you want to write in english, get someone who knows english, so you *can* write in english- proper english.
| nia chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
I think it's a great fic. I like how creepy it is. And even if we don't "see" the reavers, the way you suggest their presence is really scary.
And your english is very good, if only my french could be like that :)
| Starrbaby chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
Now, here I thought I would have trouble reading this story due to your disclaimer concerning the language barrier. You did very well in that aspect.
As for the content, that was one of the scarriest short stories I've every read. I can't imagine hiding from reavers. I also liked that it was Jayne who wanted to save the girl.