Reviews for Broken Mirror 3:City of Stone
Spokavriel chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Serious plot hole here from 1 detail left out. Owen being given the un-needed instruction to watch or listen but not do both. Otherwise Demona would have had to film the spell in daylight giving away her secret identity without Owen instantly succumbing to the spell.

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Maximara chapter 2 . 9/23/2005
The one thing the bothered my in the original City of Stone and was not delt with here is how in a city the size of New York how no one could know what had happened. Survailance cameras somewhere should have shown what happened.
Drager chapter 2 . 5/22/2005
Very nice. Keep writing.