Reviews for We, In Faith
sunneedee chapter 9 . 9/18/2014
That was a bit of a clumsy switch to first person. Have been enjoying the story so far though
Mighty Pen 20 chapter 6 . 9/11/2014
Interesting story... and your writing in general is good. Wondering why you are regurgitating some parts of canon though, given your ability to write... It is annoying. You even made a small mistake by taking this from canon a few chapters ago:

Professor Sprout nodded to Ainsley, her manner a bit frosty. Ainsley frowned. He was usually on very good terms with Sprout, but then he remembered that she was the head of Hufflepuff House.

Cedric is not the champion here! Why would she be frosty with him in her capacity as the head of the Puffs? As i said, why copy when you are perfectly capable of writing yourself.

Other than that, you have made Harry / Jean into a kinda cool fellow, but he is a jerk at times, in the ' i am looking down on you throught my nose ' manner. I dont mind having the protagonist be an ass to others if he does it in a nice, badass way, but here he feels like a greasy fella whenever he does it.
yakuza511 chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Rogue8496 chapter 5 . 2/17/2014
you can find Malfoy's wand description in the 7th book
Drewyyy101 chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
I've just recently read this story and i would love to know if it was ever finished, or left there. I enjoyed it immensely and would love to see an ending.
If you aren't up to finishing it, maybe getting it adopted but another author?
CuriousGuest chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Why did Lily snap at James when Snape was the first one to insult him? I'm talking about the part when he mentioned having no brain etc.
Josh chapter 5 . 11/7/2013
The wand of Draco Malfoy is Hawthorne and unicorn hair, ten inches precisely, reasonably springy.

I found this in harry potter and the deathly gallows page 399
halkination139 chapter 16 . 10/19/2013
what a creative plot idea! please finish
Silvers45 chapter 16 . 9/21/2013
Wow. I know that it's very unlikely that you'll continue this, but I'd like to let you know that I really enjoyed this. A lot. It was a nice read, with a detailed, clear style, an interesting plot, and a cast of well-done characters, so thank you for writing this.
mkeeg91 chapter 2 . 9/20/2013
Malfoy represents Hogwarts... I think I'm going to be sick...

though I do like Jean.
Meri has both good and bad...

but that Draco bit... gross...
Garbouw Deark chapter 16 . 7/18/2013
It's been six long, long years since you've updated this story. And yet, I have not given up hope that you'll come back to write more.
Roxanne.L.Parry chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
I loved this chapter! Jean would of done well in the snake house.
Deacon wand is: 10" precisely, Hawthorn wood and with a unicorn hair core. In case somebody didn't reply. It says it in Deathly Hallows and is on Harry Potter Wiki
a reviewer chapter 12 . 4/7/2013
great story, although it bothers me that there are no breaks to show a change of scene. that, or my phone is stuffed up. but i do like this story, i just want more of mean harry/jean :(
Pielle chapter 14 . 3/22/2013
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julia.rosey8839 chapter 16 . 3/17/2013
this is a really good story! i wish it would be continued, or you could say how it would end if it wont be finished. but i really want to know! :)
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