Reviews for The First Steps
Turtle Queen of Freeks chapter 2 . 6/29/2005
Did you get the idea for Edgar from Edgar and Ellen? Just wondering. It sounds rather interesting so far.
Ultima chapter 2 . 5/28/2005
WEE!You rock brow
MeLiO chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
This is a great start to what I'm sure will be a great story! Please continue writing! Can't wait for more!
moonface chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
i think its pretty good but i want to know if there is anymore? iv only just started looking around this site and ur story was the first i reaad. u should be proud! anyway keep it up..
Jodine16 chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
OH I wanna know what happens next! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON!

~*~Jodine16 (moggiye)~*~
Kyohaku Akuma chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Nice, a little bit creepy, and a few grammar mistakes, but not so much to be overly bad. CONTINUE THIS ONE! If you put this on hold I'll do to you what ever Anon did to get locked up!lol...just kidding ~_. Keep up the typeing!

~Kyohaku Akuma
Ultima chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
AWESOME!You are the best ever!Keep writing or I'll IM you and annoy youXD(what?..we are best friends...)
World-Without-You chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
:D! Very good piece of writting! It was wonderful! I loved it! Better than I could ever do XD. LOVED it. Please write more soon, I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Go, Wonderland!

~Citrine