|Reviews for Iris|
| Golden Eagle899 chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
| fedoraStorm chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
This story made me cry, which is pretty hard to do nowadays.
| CrossoverAUman chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Wow. That was good. I don't normal tear up in fics, but this one got me somehow (probably cause you used one of my favorite songs, which I happened to be listening to when I read this, Ironicaly).
Really, Reall good job. Your spelling and grammar were good, and, all in all, it was a good story.
Thanks for writing this.
| GameShark chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
So Sad, but good...
| Caramel-Fishy chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
All I can really say about this is: YOU MADE ME CRY! MEANIE HEAD! T-T
Other than that, I thought it was awesome and great and sad and you chose a kewl song that worked great in the story.
And I couldn't find anything wrong with it. Seriously. I mean, there wasn't even any OOC-ness! (At least that I could see.)
| Chi Yagami chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
aww bb ;.;
| shattered-words chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
I loved it, made me cry, lol. I really enjoy your stories and thanks for allowing me to host your fanfics. I already started on the Naruto fanfics.
Here is the website:
Please, let me know what you think but mind you its not finished. Later
| bellecatastrophe chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
kl...you know that song at the beginning - i absoloutly love it but i dont know who its by or what it is called cos on my MP3 it just says SONG1 which is really annoying since i dont have it with me. plz tell me. bye!
| TerraBB chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
That was cute... X3 Loved it.
| MrandMrsUnohoo chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
I think it was nice, but I am strictly anti-bbterra.
| ChubbyBuddy chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
Genius! I admire you for remembering Terra's stone...I forgot she existed. Well I liked this alot and I thought it was written well...
| X23 and Pietro forever chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
That short imagained return of Terra's make sreacm to myself, "nothing but BB's love brought her back, she's back nothing but BB's love brought her back!" then when I read the next words, i got a bit mad! You should really brought Terra back! I could write a better songfic than that! Sorry! But I'm stubborn!
| Jurodan chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Something tells me they had to look that up before realizing what day it was *snicker* Touching. You did a good job with Beast Boy and a decent job with everyone else (considering how little they actually DID in the story I can't really go in depth and say they fit perfectly). Spelling and grammar seem fine. Good job, overall. However, I will inform you that is now setting up a new policy to ban songfics. It has been effective since April 27th, and I think you at least deserve a warning before they close your account. I know that Media Miner, another fanfic hosting site, DOES allow them so you don't have to ditch the story entirely. Anyway, good job, and sorry for the bad news.
| One Esperandote chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Man that was awesome! So beautiful...please write another chapter, i love this story!
| Sapphire Artemis chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Yay! Wow, this songfic was so sweet! And for your first time at a pairing, you captured its essence well. I personally dislike Terra and any "relationship" she has with BB (I ship both BBRae and RobRae), but your fic I actually liked! I especially like the line "She was like this because she chose to save them, and look at what they’ve done to her."
You probably could've changed the "they've" to "they'd"-the tense sounds better. But that's just me, the grammar freak. Overall, the story was really cute. And the lyrics fit perfectly!
Just a warning, however: ff dot net has banned songfics. It makes me *extremely* angry, since at least six of my fics were songfics, but I didn't want to be banned. You may just have this fic deleted by the management, but knowing them...it's just a warning. I'll be sad to see this fic go, if someone is mean enough to report it. *cries*